TIP 4 - Use subheadings to stop scrollers

If you're a member here at Wealthy Affiliate, you'll have no doubt read or heard Kyle talk about making your pages and posts more readable by adding sub headings. As he says, these break up the text and make them look a lot less 'blocky', and as a result more inspiring to read. But it also helps engage the people who visit your sales pages or reviews, and who then immediately start scrolling to see if anything stands out that may be of interest. I'll admit, I am one of those people, and I'm by no means alone.

Sub headings simply act as mini headlines that reassure the reader that what is about to follow is important and should be read. So, going back to what we covered in tip 1's titles lesson, we need to set up a promise in our sub headings that entices the reader to read or continue reading.

The perfect title or sub heading

I find a good way to come up with a good, enticing title or sub heading is to simply ask yourself "Why should anybody read the text after the title?". How you answer this will determine how it will translate into the compelling title or sub heading that precedes it.

Unconvinced? Well try this little test. Go back to a book, magazine article, web page or blog post that you really enjoyed and just had to keep reading to the end. Then see how the author kept you engaged with compelling titles and sub headings.

Stop the page scanners!

If, like me, you're a page scroller and scanner, you'll know how easy it is for a reader to click through to a page, and then just scroll through scanning for the most relevant information.

If written well, a sub heading can stop scanners like me in our tracks and trigger an unstoppable urge to read content that is perceived to be too good to miss. Or "if I don't read this, I'll be missing out on something important".

So always ask yourself before publishing your page, does it have sub headings that are unmissable to us page scanners and scrollers. Will they make us want to stop and read them so we don't miss out on what needs to be read, if we're going to make the purchase. As an example, think about headlines such as:

"If you read nothing else..." or
"All you need to know about X in just 30 seconds" or
"How 'X product' helped Mrs L in the UK".



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CowboyJames Premium
Excellent points and training. I realize my headlines and subtitles are all wrong.
Thank you Sean
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SeanGreentre Premium
Top man. Thanks James.
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CowboyJames Premium
By the way, I am a big fan of Columbo.
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SeanGreentre Premium
Haha... me too. I have been known to watch Columbo episodes all day, from morning to night!!!
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LouisaB Premium
Thank you!
From the beginning to the end was thought provoking.
Each topic held my attention. So I realize that you just
Delivered the right food at the proper time. Who needed it as
Much as myself.

I will keep this page marked until I get my post and pages
In harmony with your purpose.

I really appreciate this!
Blessings!

LouisaB
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SeanGreentre Premium
Thank you Louisa. I'm flattered by your kind words. I'm so pleased it helped you. Thank you again.
Sean
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Armlemt Premium
What a great tutorial! This is going to help me as I have never been much of a salesperson. I enjoyed the tutorial and I took a lot of good notes that I believe I will be able to incorporate into my reviews on products. Thank you for taking the time to put this together!

Anita
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SeanGreentre Premium
Wow. Thanks Anita. I'm so pleased that you found this tutorial helpful. I'm sure it will help you increase your sales page and review page conversions going forward. Thanks too for your very kind words. It really is appreciated.
Kindest regards,
Sean
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Armlemt Premium
It was my pleasure, Sean!
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Jimbo6 Premium
great Post - my goodness so much to learn - i'd be happy to get to a decent page number on Google first ha ha to actually get some readers - all in good time i guess ?
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SeanGreentre Premium
Thanks Jim. You are very kind. Don't worry, these can all be implemented in good time. These are tips to give you a head start, over and above what the training offers here at WA - which of course is fantastic in itself. Good luck.
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Jimbo6 Premium
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MozMary Premium Plus
can you give an example of a subtitle that would stop a scroller/page scanner like you then? lol
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SeanGreentre Premium
Haha... That's a good question Mary. I should include an example shouldn't i.... I shall amend this. You could use something like "STOP PRESS:... ' or "If you read nothing else..." or "All you need to know about....." or "This is how XYZ helped Mrs L in the UK". That kind of thing. Something that at a glance will help me get the salient points immediately, for me to then be able to make a purchase decision.
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MozMary Premium Plus
:D yes, I'm a page scanner too and I love the idea of being able to pull this big group in - great ideas!
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SeanGreentre Premium
Thanks again Mary. I'm glad you found it of use. :-)
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SeanGreentre Premium
I have updated the trianing. Thanks again for bringing this to my attention. :-)
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