My first website for my dear wife

Last Update: March 07, 2018

Although I joined Wealthy Affiliate more than 6 months ago, I wasted a lot of time because I was very busy with my other projects, health issues, and with moving to another state. We moved from Florida to colorful Colorado.

However, from the very beginning I understood how usefulness and resourceful WA is. As a result I'm back and I'm going to move forward in achieving my goals. i've already chosen some niches, but...

My wife told me she want to start her own cleaning business, and I created a website for her. Since English is my second, precisely, third language, I have a big challenge, thats is writing quality posts. I filled the website with content, and I'd like to ask all of you to leave comments about the design and the content of the website.

http://diamondshineco.com

I'd like to understand what to change or improve. She needs quality website. I'm going to write 3 more posts based on main keywords.

I appreciate your help.

Respectfully,

Ruslan

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buffetearns Premium
Wonderful website, it looks excellent!

Wayne
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rusik77 Premium
Thank you Wayne.
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manne13666 Premium
Hello!

It looks like a gorgeous website. I did find a few grammatical errors, so I hope you don't mind that I share them and their corrections here.

On the landing page:

Natalia has an extensive experience in professional cleaning services. (The an should be removed)

Natalia is very inductrious and hard working person, who pride in her work. She absolutely understands her commitment do her work thoroughly. (It should go like this: Natalia is a very industrious and hard working person who takes pride in her work. She absolutely understand her commitment to do her work thoroughly.)

Using eco-friendly cleaning products in her work, Natalia ensures safety of your health. (The correction is in the last part of this sentence: Natalia ensure the safety of your health)

In the About Me section:

I have an extensive experience in cleaning services (Just take out the an).

In the Our Services section:

We provide following services (It should go: We provide the following services)

Natalia is honest, reputable, and diligent professional (There should be the word "an" after Natalia is)

Let's cleanness energize you for new achievements! (I would have gone with: Let cleanliness energize you for new achievements!)

, as well as, after-construction cleaning.Let's schedule your routine cleaning. (I would have gone with: , as well as post-construction cleaning. Let's schedule your routine cleaning.)

as well as, airbnb cleaning. Scores for the cleanness of your rentals will exceed your expectations. your tenants will be more than happy. (Correction: as well as Airbnb cleaning. Scores for the cleanliness of your rental will exceed your expectations. Your tenants will be more than happy.)

In the Why Work With Us section

NATALIA IS AWESOME CLEANER. (NATALIA IS AN AWESOME CLEANER.)

Just something to think about to clean it up just a little bit. It's a very friendly site and I love the use of colors. I hope it goes well!
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rusik77 Premium
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your help, especially with correcting me. I’m working hard to improve my English and writing skills as well.
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manne13666 Premium
You're very welcome. I'm happy to help! Good luck on the new website.
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rusik77 Premium
Thank you so much for these corrections. I really appreciate it.
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Joshua2765 Premium
Hello, Ruslan.

First, let me say that you have built a very nice website for your wife. I only looked at the main page, so far, but I have compiled a list of some items you'll want to look at.

I used to work as an academic writing tutor at a local college and just have an eye for certain kinds of errors. However, I do commend you on your handling of the comma; very few errors!

The list is in Word document format, so I would need an email address to send it to you. Just PM me at your convenience.

Continued success,

Joshua
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rusik77 Premium
Thank a lot. Really appreciate your help.
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JillAlexaVA Premium
Hi Rusik77, Natalia must be so very proud of you. What a lovely job you did with this website. It is really impressive and I wish you and Natalia all the best. Kind regards, Jill
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rusik77 Premium
Thank you so much
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accad Premium
Don't worry you are not alone. I was born a Filipino and English is my fourth language.
We all struggle with this dilemma but as long as people understand us we can communicate with them.
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rusik77 Premium
Thanks a lot for understanding. Appreciate it
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accad Premium
You are welcome.
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