Hi. Great site, you've done a lot of work. I think you would do well to link to your WA review and let them read more about this great place. That's your "selling page" so let it do the work. I think the search engines like it when you do this and don't try to link everything to a sign up page. My two cents anyways.

Also, on your WA Review you've actually placed your affiliate link. It might be better to put wealthy affiliate .com and embed your link there. Overall, great job. Left you a comment.

A sincere article. An article that is written from your heart. Not too lengthy. I enjoyed reading it. Nice work Linda!

Way to go linda I think u got it girl nice work

Nice. Made comment.

Alright, I think I got it all done, Thank You every one. The guns have been remover, grammar checked, a(n)'s done. and i added another picture and removed link. Loving it. Thanks again.

I like the focus on vets. My husband is one of the Vietnam variety. I like how you break into the WA experience. One picayune thing from me. You don't form regular plurals with an apostrophe S. So it's guns, not gun's. Other than cleaning up your grammar, I think you've got a wonderful start and I would refer veterans to you (if I didn't have my own site in the works).

Hi Linda, like your entrance, your explanation, your opening up with your own problem, the only thing I don't like is that you suggest a weapon/gun page and selling there knowledge and products, I would stay at the surface, no suggestion at all, wish you very much succes. Loes

Great focus--those who have served our country. I have not seen that approach before.

A very good website and well deserved of our troops. The only suggestion that I have is that you proof read it again for errors. Not many but I notices a few. Especially where "an" is needed instead of an "a". God bless and much success to you.
Phyllis

I can tell you have a sincere appreciation for our veterans and I'm sure they will see that too. I would probably remove your affiliate link at the bottom of that page since there is 1 just above it. A few more images will make it look better too, but you're off to a pretty good start.