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for my first website here. please review if you can and leave some feedback for me here on the site, its greatly appreciated. also how should i drive traffic? any hints or tips?
Hi again :-) First thing I noticed is that its all mushed together, IMO you need to put some spaces between paragraphs and break them up a bit.. long blocks of text is hard to read and many wont even bother to read it... Add some headings to the paragraphs :-) Just a couple of suggestions. Your doing a good job adding content and images. Don't worry about the "dressing" so much it was just a observation. Keep on keeping on, its looking good :-)
goodness! cant believe i forgot the link! http://independentonlineincome.com thanks digger! lol
Hi :-) you need to give us the URL of the website :-) As for the second part of the question continue with the training....TIPS, do the training, and all the tasks, don't rush through or skip anything.. stay focused ;-)
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I think i finally have a decent amount of content?
for my first website here. please review if you can and leave some feedback for me here on the site, its greatly appreciated. also how should i drive traffic? any hints or tips?
HI, Very good. Great choice of theme and very engaging visuals. Looks really good so far. Information is simple and to the point to maintain interest.
Hi again :-) First thing I noticed is that its all mushed together, IMO you need to put some spaces between paragraphs and break them up a bit.. long blocks of text is hard to read and many wont even bother to read it... Add some headings to the paragraphs :-) Just a couple of suggestions. Your doing a good job adding content and images. Don't worry about the "dressing" so much it was just a observation. Keep on keeping on, its looking good :-)
goodness! cant believe i forgot the link! http://independentonlineincome.com thanks digger! lol
Hi :-) you need to give us the URL of the website :-) As for the second part of the question continue with the training....TIPS, do the training, and all the tasks, don't rush through or skip anything.. stay focused ;-)
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its essentially a rough draft and im not sure what i think so far http://independentonlineincome.com
yeah thats what i was thinking rich. thanks so much for time and input its greatly appreciated.
Look good so far, you might want to break up the text a little bit so it's easier on the eye. And add a photo of yourself, maybe?
hey thanks for the review! i was thinking the same on the home page. appreciate it very much!
took a quick look,going in the right direction.i think the home page text needs a few paragraphs to break it up,and take the reader on a logical journey,the links seem to be in the right place,so well done
also please feel to comment if there is something that needs to be changed or any suggeestions
wow thats awesome! really reassuring im always critical on everything i write even when i was in school thanks for looking tho! appreciate it alot
I'm the worse when it comes to critical, I take a photo shoot and by the end of editing I hate my work (going through hundreds of photos)
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Was wondering if someone could take a look at the site?
its essentially a rough draft and im not sure what i think so far http://independentonlineincome.com
yeah thats what i was thinking rich. thanks so much for time and input its greatly appreciated.
Look good so far, you might want to break up the text a little bit so it's easier on the eye. And add a photo of yourself, maybe?
hey thanks for the review! i was thinking the same on the home page. appreciate it very much!
took a quick look,going in the right direction.i think the home page text needs a few paragraphs to break it up,and take the reader on a logical journey,the links seem to be in the right place,so well done
also please feel to comment if there is something that needs to be changed or any suggeestions
wow thats awesome! really reassuring im always critical on everything i write even when i was in school thanks for looking tho! appreciate it alot
I'm the worse when it comes to critical, I take a photo shoot and by the end of editing I hate my work (going through hundreds of photos)
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HI, Very good. Great choice of theme and very engaging visuals. Looks really good so far. Information is simple and to the point to maintain interest.