Emergency Presentation System

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Updated 8 years ago

https://vimeo.com/171920994

Hey Y'all
Sorry I was absent for a few days. I do have a Doctor's note excusing me from class.

Awhile back I published a post about determination and persistence as several of us have. Even tho I didn't have the extreme hardships that Roebling's faced building the Brooklyn bridge this project took determination and persistence.
If you have about 3 minutes please watch this video and let me know what you think.

https://vimeo.com/171920994

Thanks for your time.
Hope all is going great for everyone.
Have an incredible day!

Until next time,

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mobader

8 years ago

It's good but I would agree with Glen to make it shorter and if you are skipping slides before quote then skip only one. Excellent first go

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Thanks Doc for your time and thoughts

GlenPalo

8 years ago

Awesome!! I love the Indian test pattern. That's really ancient.

I have two suggestions:

Instead of Work Hard, Dream Big, I would reverse it to say Dream Big, Work Hard.

I think it would have more impact if it were shortened. My attention span started to drift at about 2 minutes or so.

Here is a link to Patrick Bet-David's 90 second video showing what can be done in 90 seconds.

https://youtu.be/h-KHWUq3B7I

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Very good points Glen. That old test pattern was a pretty cool find. Thanks for your time.

Tezsie

8 years ago

That´s a great motivational video, Tim. Great quotes and pictures too. And excellently timed with the music.

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Thanks Tessa. Glad you liked it

Tezsie

8 years ago

You´re most welcome, Tim.

Doug-Arthur

8 years ago

Fantastic, I think I need something like that

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Thanks for watching Doug. It was fun to do when it was said and done

Alasani

8 years ago

Love the idea and the video, Tim. It made me tear up and smile at the same time. Beautiful!

I am not sure if the starting image (the black and white) is there to stay, but it does not seem to match the beauty of the rest of the video. And at the end, there is an obsolete music fragment, it seems. Other than this: terrific! Good job!

Hope this helps,
Audrey

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Thanks for watching Audrey. That image can definitely be changed. Thanks for the good thought

Alasani

8 years ago

You're welcome, Tim. :-)

cosmicradio

8 years ago

Hey Tim! My computer would only access the audio portion. My screen was black. I like the song and the singing-Is that you?

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Ya right! Cris Rea if you have never heard his music you might want to check him out Thanks

cosmicradio

8 years ago

I wasn't familiar with Cris Rea, but I like him. Were other people able to view the video, Tim?

Loubelle

8 years ago

This is excellent. Great images and music. All the best dreamer

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Thanks Louise for your time and comment. All the best to you also.

Ecowarrior

8 years ago

I loved the video and glad to see you back! At least you didn't you the excuse of the 'dog ate my homework'. Lol
Best wishes, Lisa

Dreamer56

8 years ago

Glad you liked it Lisa. I couldn't use that excuse again I used it last week. :)

Calmkoala

8 years ago

Wow, this had me sat with a smile all the way through! I loved the images and the words were on screen long enough to read through them easily. I say really well done! (Small PS; 2:49 - is 'than' supposed to read 'then'?)