Need My Website Reviewed

Last Update: January 23, 2014

Hey WA friends. I finally got to the part of my training that asks me to put my website up for everyone to take a look and give me some feedback. It is the first one I ever made so I am sure there will be plenty of things that new viewers, like yourself, would love to see. I will be adding more things as I learn to operate the WP theme and other tech stuff as my skills progress.

It would bless me if you would include a training link relevant to the comment that your making. Please leave me links to your website if you would like me to take a look and review it with new eyes.

Thanks to all the wonderful people in WA for equipping me to start a new business. I will be reviewing related books on Amazon and marketing them on a separate section of the website. Any suggestions on other ways to monetize the niche will be welcomed.

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christine2 Premium
I realise that your website is evolving and i am glad people are giving you feedback. i don't have much criticism to offer, other than I am not a fan of yellow and purple, but that could be just personal taste. Content gets added with time, so I am sure you will add more. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your site and i see you have already chnanged a few things base on feedback.
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4edward Premium
Thanks for the feedback, I'm still unsure on the background, but this one is temporary. I checked out your site and I see it is neatly written and easy to follow on the plan of action. Lot's of images, keep up the good work.
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christine2 Premium
Thank you for your feedback . I appreciate it. let me know when you have made further changes.I would like to look again!
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DIGGER12 Premium
HI, to be honest ( hope you don't mind) but the back ground ( yellow-green with squiggles) is distracting from the content. The basic purple and white isn't bad, although you might want to go with a softer color, or a softer shade of purple. When I clicked on the menu, all the links brought me to the same page ( the heading was different) but all of them had the "checkout line" story. I'm not sure what your site is about, what it will do for me.. you don't tell me why I am there, what I will find, how it will help me. I think you have some good ideas,but you need to add more content, and tweak a couple of things like the menu. You could add some color/ images to the site to help break up the sections. I am a newbie myself, I try and look at it as a visitor piton of view, and try to make some suggestions.. I hope this helps a bit... keep at it, your off to a good start :-)
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4edward Premium
Thanks for the honesty, I'm debating on having a fixed home page with the information you asked about or I will put and item on the menu bar such as " Purpose" or "FAQ".
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jaker Premium
I would get rid of that meta widget on your sidebar in wordpress you can just drag and drop it back to the left side
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4edward Premium
Thanks for the input I will be working on that right away.
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Animate Premium
Hi Edward, let me say at the start that I am not religious and did not have a religious upbringing. Given that, I do believe in 'God' (for want of a better name), the creator of the Universe, and all the beauty and wonder it entails, which to me is an expression of God's love. I have left you a comment on your site - a bible quote which I also have on my website.

Your site, being very new, is a little short on content still, but here I want to advise you before you get too far, to break up blocks of text into paragraphs, add pictures or headings. I feel that your site needs a little 'jazzing' up for it looks rather bland to me at the moment (that is probably just a matter of personal taste). Also, I'd introduce myself by name right at the start of 'About Me' rather than right at the end.

There is a link in your side menu, under 'Recent Comments' which, if clicked, leads your readers away from your site to Tiffany's site, but I don't think there is anything you can do about it except not have it in such an open spot. Comments on my site can also be linked to the websites of visitors, but this is not as obvious as on your site. It has to do with the choice of website theme and how the site is structured.

I can see that this is a labour of love for you Edward - wishing you great success, and have fun!
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4edward Premium
Thanks for the heads up on my site, I will be making changes based on your comments. PS - I'm not religious either, for me it's about relationship. Many blessings.
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tmamarketing Premium
So far I really like your website! Much success to you. You come across very authentic, so I believe that people will take the time to review your website. Much success!
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