oh, the change that you have made to your background is absolutely gorgeous

I checked your website. I like the color scheme. That was a good story about the woman at the checkout.

My only suggestions would be to rearrange the tabs at the top so that about me is not first. This can be done in your WordPress dashboard under appearance-menus. You should be able to rearrange them under menu structure.

I would also add more personal stories.

There have been a number of time in my life where I know the Lord has taken over to accomplish something.

I remember once my niece was crying in my arms. Her three year old had moments before broken a gift from my wife's brother to my wife.

My wife’s brother was angry and had made some comment to our niece that I didn't quite hear. My wife Mary had told our niece Giovanna to go to me so I held her as she was crying.

I remember distinctly how something stepped before me in my mind. It was like I had been pushed to the back. I had a sense of something else that imparted this to me as a way of explanation. I am fishing. I wrote imparted because, it was more of an awareness or an imagery rather than a spoken word. Then these words came from my mouth. We can replace that thing if we want but we can’t replace you!

I've never before seen such a profound effect on another individual. Those few words were the exact thing that she needed to hear in her life at the exact right moment.

I've tried those very words again since in other similar situations but never have they had such an effect. I knew then as I know now, those were not my words.

Lord Bless your endeavors.

Good start to your site. I agree with the other commenters about the yellow background. It is too distracting. A light gray would compliment the colors you already have.

Very Well Done

Hi Edward,
I like your website theme, being a fan of purple. The content is great; you've obviously put alot of effort into it. I would just add an image or two on the Bible verses page. Good luck on the rest of your content and keep up the brilliant work :)
Annjelyn

I realise that your website is evolving and i am glad people are giving you feedback. i don't have much criticism to offer, other than I am not a fan of yellow and purple, but that could be just personal taste. Content gets added with time, so I am sure you will add more. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your site and i see you have already chnanged a few things base on feedback.
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HI, to be honest ( hope you don't mind) but the back ground ( yellow-green with squiggles) is distracting from the content. The basic purple and white isn't bad, although you might want to go with a softer color, or a softer shade of purple. When I clicked on the menu, all the links brought me to the same page ( the heading was different) but all of them had the "checkout line" story. I'm not sure what your site is about, what it will do for me.. you don't tell me why I am there, what I will find, how it will help me. I think you have some good ideas,but you need to add more content, and tweak a couple of things like the menu. You could add some color/ images to the site to help break up the sections. I am a newbie myself, I try and look at it as a visitor piton of view, and try to make some suggestions.. I hope this helps a bit... keep at it, your off to a good start :-)

I would get rid of that meta widget on your sidebar in wordpress you can just drag and drop it back to the left side

Hi Edward, let me say at the start that I am not religious and did not have a religious upbringing. Given that, I do believe in 'God' (for want of a better name), the creator of the Universe, and all the beauty and wonder it entails, which to me is an expression of God's love. I have left you a comment on your site - a bible quote which I also have on my website.

Your site, being very new, is a little short on content still, but here I want to advise you before you get too far, to break up blocks of text into paragraphs, add pictures or headings. I feel that your site needs a little 'jazzing' up for it looks rather bland to me at the moment (that is probably just a matter of personal taste). Also, I'd introduce myself by name right at the start of 'About Me' rather than right at the end.

There is a link in your side menu, under 'Recent Comments' which, if clicked, leads your readers away from your site to Tiffany's site, but I don't think there is anything you can do about it except not have it in such an open spot. Comments on my site can also be linked to the websites of visitors, but this is not as obvious as on your site. It has to do with the choice of website theme and how the site is structured.

I can see that this is a labour of love for you Edward - wishing you great success, and have fun!

So far I really like your website! Much success to you. You come across very authentic, so I believe that people will take the time to review your website. Much success!