About kmelvin
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Hey everyone, thanks for visiting my profile. Well I'm an Irish lad, born and bred in Dublin. I've joined WA mostly as a way supplement my

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Hi, is there limitations to using optimizepress to create a membership sie on WA?

Thanks
Karl

You can use optimizepress as it's a wordpress based theme (program)

Can i create a membership sites with optimizepress?

Can i create a membership sites with optimizepress?

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Everything Wordpress
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Hi, is there limitations to using optimizepress to create a membership sie on WA?

Thanks
Karl

You can use optimizepress as it's a wordpress based theme (program)

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Social Engagement & Marketing
Updated

Hi,

Is there a training video/blog on creating a terms of business page?

I'm selling an online course and want to make sure i'm covered.

Thanks
Karl

There are many sites around that has their terms and conditions readily available on their site. You can probably take some ideas from there. Here's one for example: https://thesixfigurementors.com/legal

Don't think WA do that bit - too many legal variations. But have a look at

https://termsfeed.com/blog/sample-terms-and-conditions-template/

Gives you a real good start

Creating a terms of businessuse?

Creating a terms of businessuse?

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Social Engagement & Marketing
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Hi,

Is there a training video/blog on creating a terms of business page?

I'm selling an online course and want to make sure i'm covered.

Thanks
Karl

There are many sites around that has their terms and conditions readily available on their site. You can probably take some ideas from there. Here's one for example: https://thesixfigurementors.com/legal

Don't think WA do that bit - too many legal variations. But have a look at

https://termsfeed.com/blog/sample-terms-and-conditions-template/

Gives you a real good start

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Social Engagement & Marketing
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Hi,

Can i get your thoughts on my sales funnel?

https://kmelvin.clickfunnels.com/self-esteem-blueprint

Thanks a million
Karl

The headline doesn't speak to my hot buttons if this is something that I would be interested in.

"Join therapist Karl Melvin's online step-by-step guide to building self-esteem and strengthening boundaries"

This simply says what it is you are offering, it doesn't indicate "what" the benefits to what you are offering.

Updated, how does this look:

https://kmelvin.clickfunnels.com/self-esteem-blueprint

Thanks for the feedback Kyle.

Shouldn't it be "Instant" rather than "Instance"?

Fixed ;-)

Here is my 2 cents:

The header section needs to capture the attention of the reader, but unfortunately I didn't understand what exactly what problem you are trying to solve.

For me, if I was to create a header, I would first put my face on the left (the header section) and then I would write something like "I was a low self-esteem dude who..., but it was until I found this method...".

The most important task for a header is capture the attention of the reader and entice them to read further down your copy.

After the header, comes the lead, which is a sentence to enhance/amplify the effect of your header. Something like "Hi, my name is Karl, and I am going to show you the exact method that has turned me from this to that".

I have written a guide for you to write your sales page. You can check this out if you haven't seen it before.

https://barenakedmarketing.com/write-compelling-sales-page

Cheers!
Jack


It looks good Carl. I think you just need to recheck the spelling and grammar. there is a heading for instance saying, "Get instance access to the..."

Thanks Neville.

Where are you seeing , "Get instance access to the..."?
The button is , "Get instance access" and ", "Get instance access Now".

Cheers



Sorry Neville, I see what you mean now ;-)

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Can i get your feedback?

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Hi,

Can i get your thoughts on my sales funnel?

https://kmelvin.clickfunnels.com/self-esteem-blueprint

Thanks a million
Karl

The headline doesn't speak to my hot buttons if this is something that I would be interested in.

"Join therapist Karl Melvin's online step-by-step guide to building self-esteem and strengthening boundaries"

This simply says what it is you are offering, it doesn't indicate "what" the benefits to what you are offering.

Updated, how does this look:

https://kmelvin.clickfunnels.com/self-esteem-blueprint

Thanks for the feedback Kyle.

Shouldn't it be "Instant" rather than "Instance"?

Fixed ;-)

Here is my 2 cents:

The header section needs to capture the attention of the reader, but unfortunately I didn't understand what exactly what problem you are trying to solve.

For me, if I was to create a header, I would first put my face on the left (the header section) and then I would write something like "I was a low self-esteem dude who..., but it was until I found this method...".

The most important task for a header is capture the attention of the reader and entice them to read further down your copy.

After the header, comes the lead, which is a sentence to enhance/amplify the effect of your header. Something like "Hi, my name is Karl, and I am going to show you the exact method that has turned me from this to that".

I have written a guide for you to write your sales page. You can check this out if you haven't seen it before.

https://barenakedmarketing.com/write-compelling-sales-page

Cheers!
Jack


It looks good Carl. I think you just need to recheck the spelling and grammar. there is a heading for instance saying, "Get instance access to the..."

Thanks Neville.

Where are you seeing , "Get instance access to the..."?
The button is , "Get instance access" and ", "Get instance access Now".

Cheers



Sorry Neville, I see what you mean now ;-)

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Hi guys, is it possible to get some feedback to my sales funnel?

It is for an online personal development course. Conversions are weak and I would appreciate your feedba

Hey Karl,

The sales page is coming along nicely. I'll give my suggestions, and you may implement them if you like it.

Header: WELCOME TO KARL MELVIN'S BUILDING BETTER RELATIONSHIPS ONLINE COURSE

Instead of having the header that you have, I would put those words as a logo. Just like the attached image.

In the header section, I would write something like "Want your spouse to love you more?" or something along the line which will address to your audience's problems.

Sub Header: LEARN HOW TO BUILD HEALTHIER AND HAPPIER RELATIONSHIPS
OR BREAK FREE FROM TOXIC RELATIONSHIPS - Good, I like it!

List 1: The BBR course was designed after hundreds of clients sessions, helping individuals understand why their relationships were not working and how to make quick and effective change - I like this

List 2: Stress and Worry were the most common components of all the relationships Karl has coached and the initial module provides a comprehensive guide to understanding and reducing these two aspects of life

Discover the 2 common yet critical problems that will break a relationship, and how the BBR course can help fend off those problems - You want to entice people to get in your course

List 3: A guide to developing Independence and healthy Interdependence through understanding your needs with techniques to meet these needs - Sound complicated.

Suggestion: A guide to know when your other half needs you, and when you should back off - Is this better?

List 4: Building Self-Esteem so you are more assertive and confident and not hindered by guilt or fear - How does this relate to relationship?

List 5: Strengthening Boundaries so you are free to express yourself and look after your own needs

How to avoid being sucked into a mundane relationship - If I guess correctly, express yourself and look after your own needs is another meaning for pursuing your passion. I wrote mundane relationship because when couples are too complacent with each other, they will not pursue their own goals.

EACH MODULE INCLUDES VIDEO PRESENTATIONS, GUIDED MEDITATIONS AND PRACTICAL TOOLS AND TECHNIQUES - In this section, I will include:

1. the length of your video training
2. Value of each module

Are there any case studies? People love that.

Button: SIGN UP NOW AND YOU WILL GET THE FOLLOWING BONUSES - Not working

Actually, I've written an article on how you can structure your sales page. You may like to check it out and get some ideas from it:

https://barenakedmarketing.com/write-compelling-sales-page

Let me know it this helps.

Cheers!
Jack

Jack, I really appreciate your detailed feedback and I'm going to apply all of them.

Thanks a million for the help

Take care
Karl

You are most welcome Karl! Let me know if you need a second review

Hey, to be honest you have me thinking about rebranding the course completely.

It was designed initially to help improve relationships but in reality it is more a personal development course aimed at building self-worth.

To rebrand means I'll have to re-record the content and update the worksheets but it might be better off in the long term.

You have to find who your real target audience are. As long as your brand fits who you want to target, it's a green light.

I've learnt that when you try to attract almost everybody, they tend to repel you, and when you start to repel the many and focus on a targeted group, that target will be attracted to you like a magnet.

Most importantly, you have to focus on who you want to help.

I will be more than happy to review your funnel again.

Cheers!
Jack

Sale funnel looking great, It's delivers the message to your audience looking for coaching. Very impressive.

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Can I get funnel feedback?

Can I get funnel feedback?

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Social Engagement & Marketing
Updated

Hi guys, is it possible to get some feedback to my sales funnel?

It is for an online personal development course. Conversions are weak and I would appreciate your feedba

Hey Karl,

The sales page is coming along nicely. I'll give my suggestions, and you may implement them if you like it.

Header: WELCOME TO KARL MELVIN'S BUILDING BETTER RELATIONSHIPS ONLINE COURSE

Instead of having the header that you have, I would put those words as a logo. Just like the attached image.

In the header section, I would write something like "Want your spouse to love you more?" or something along the line which will address to your audience's problems.

Sub Header: LEARN HOW TO BUILD HEALTHIER AND HAPPIER RELATIONSHIPS
OR BREAK FREE FROM TOXIC RELATIONSHIPS - Good, I like it!

List 1: The BBR course was designed after hundreds of clients sessions, helping individuals understand why their relationships were not working and how to make quick and effective change - I like this

List 2: Stress and Worry were the most common components of all the relationships Karl has coached and the initial module provides a comprehensive guide to understanding and reducing these two aspects of life

Discover the 2 common yet critical problems that will break a relationship, and how the BBR course can help fend off those problems - You want to entice people to get in your course

List 3: A guide to developing Independence and healthy Interdependence through understanding your needs with techniques to meet these needs - Sound complicated.

Suggestion: A guide to know when your other half needs you, and when you should back off - Is this better?

List 4: Building Self-Esteem so you are more assertive and confident and not hindered by guilt or fear - How does this relate to relationship?

List 5: Strengthening Boundaries so you are free to express yourself and look after your own needs

How to avoid being sucked into a mundane relationship - If I guess correctly, express yourself and look after your own needs is another meaning for pursuing your passion. I wrote mundane relationship because when couples are too complacent with each other, they will not pursue their own goals.

EACH MODULE INCLUDES VIDEO PRESENTATIONS, GUIDED MEDITATIONS AND PRACTICAL TOOLS AND TECHNIQUES - In this section, I will include:

1. the length of your video training
2. Value of each module

Are there any case studies? People love that.

Button: SIGN UP NOW AND YOU WILL GET THE FOLLOWING BONUSES - Not working

Actually, I've written an article on how you can structure your sales page. You may like to check it out and get some ideas from it:

https://barenakedmarketing.com/write-compelling-sales-page

Let me know it this helps.

Cheers!
Jack

Jack, I really appreciate your detailed feedback and I'm going to apply all of them.

Thanks a million for the help

Take care
Karl

You are most welcome Karl! Let me know if you need a second review

Hey, to be honest you have me thinking about rebranding the course completely.

It was designed initially to help improve relationships but in reality it is more a personal development course aimed at building self-worth.

To rebrand means I'll have to re-record the content and update the worksheets but it might be better off in the long term.

You have to find who your real target audience are. As long as your brand fits who you want to target, it's a green light.

I've learnt that when you try to attract almost everybody, they tend to repel you, and when you start to repel the many and focus on a targeted group, that target will be attracted to you like a magnet.

Most importantly, you have to focus on who you want to help.

I will be more than happy to review your funnel again.

Cheers!
Jack

Sale funnel looking great, It's delivers the message to your audience looking for coaching. Very impressive.

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Website Development & Programming
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Hi,

I have my site mail redirected to my hotmail but I would like to disable this and just use the webmail function.

How do I do this?

Thanks
Karl

Trying to create WA email, get error 'Server responded: -ERR Login failed' Any ideas?

I hope you got a resolution, if not, let me know.

You don't disable a forward, you would simply want to delete the forward and you would create a new email (this time a normal one) under the same email addy Karl.

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How do i disable email forward?

How do i disable email forward?

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Website Development & Programming
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Hi,

I have my site mail redirected to my hotmail but I would like to disable this and just use the webmail function.

How do I do this?

Thanks
Karl

Trying to create WA email, get error 'Server responded: -ERR Login failed' Any ideas?

I hope you got a resolution, if not, let me know.

You don't disable a forward, you would simply want to delete the forward and you would create a new email (this time a normal one) under the same email addy Karl.

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