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Hey there WA community! I just wrote a short blog post and was wondering if I could get some comments on it from my fellow members here.

Hi Jonathan, I clicked through to your site and I agree that the header images is far to big, I had to scroll down a long way to get to the relevant part of the site, other than that It a good site! Not being a poker player I would not be grabbed by the headlines but I would like to have known a bit more about you on the front page, giving you a presence on the site from the get go!
To your success!
Bernie

Hey there! Thanks for your feedback Bernie. I have actually been very torn between leaving my front page as a blog roll or creating a static front page. Maybe I should create a new discussion for that... Thank you for taking the time to look at my site :)

Hello. I checked out your site. The layout is really nice and the post is very informative and sort of entertaining. I dont know anything about poker expect you need cards to play...hahaha. so i didnt leave a comment
great niche though. wish you luck :)

Thanks for checking out my site anyways :) I know you are doing some big things with your site. Keep working hard!

Thanks JSKentopp. and much success to you :)

Hey Jonathan,
Left you a comment.
Best Regards,
Jim

Thank you! I really appreciate the time to look at my site and leave a comment :)

I just returned the favor!

Nice one Jon. Left you a comment :)

Thanks for your awesome comment Cathy! I loved your recent post and I left you my feedback on your site. Your definitely talk about something that is sensitive but I enjoyed it because I felt like I got to know you a little better.

Would anyone like to leave a comment on the site? I'm just trying to get some engagement on the site. I will gladly leave a comment on any pages or posts you give me the link to.

Thanks.

Looks Great:o))

Thanks!

Awesome everyone! I will be sure to resize as soon as possible.

Thanks for the feedback :)

I agree with msdj8163, the header image and title is a bit too big, That's all everything else is good.

Thank you for your feedback! I actually just changed the dimensions of the logo. Tell me what you think please :)

Hi Jonathan,

Nice site when I navigate through. But, I agree wit Debbie the header image is too big.

Terenzia

Thanks for looking at my site. I just changed the logo dimensions and would love to get some feedback on it. Thanks :)

I took a look at your website. The header picture is too big for the website. You need to downsize the picture or find a picture that will fit in the space provided. The article was interesting to read. Debbie

Thanks for reading and I just changed the logo's (that's the header pic, right?) dimensions. Take a look and let me know if it is still too big.

Thank you for your time :)

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I Need Help Please? New Post :)

I Need Help Please? New Post :)

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Hey there WA community! I just wrote a short blog post and was wondering if I could get some comments on it from my fellow members here.

Hi Jonathan, I clicked through to your site and I agree that the header images is far to big, I had to scroll down a long way to get to the relevant part of the site, other than that It a good site! Not being a poker player I would not be grabbed by the headlines but I would like to have known a bit more about you on the front page, giving you a presence on the site from the get go!
To your success!
Bernie

Hey there! Thanks for your feedback Bernie. I have actually been very torn between leaving my front page as a blog roll or creating a static front page. Maybe I should create a new discussion for that... Thank you for taking the time to look at my site :)

Hello. I checked out your site. The layout is really nice and the post is very informative and sort of entertaining. I dont know anything about poker expect you need cards to play...hahaha. so i didnt leave a comment
great niche though. wish you luck :)

Thanks for checking out my site anyways :) I know you are doing some big things with your site. Keep working hard!

Thanks JSKentopp. and much success to you :)

Hey Jonathan,
Left you a comment.
Best Regards,
Jim

Thank you! I really appreciate the time to look at my site and leave a comment :)

I just returned the favor!

Nice one Jon. Left you a comment :)

Thanks for your awesome comment Cathy! I loved your recent post and I left you my feedback on your site. Your definitely talk about something that is sensitive but I enjoyed it because I felt like I got to know you a little better.

Would anyone like to leave a comment on the site? I'm just trying to get some engagement on the site. I will gladly leave a comment on any pages or posts you give me the link to.

Thanks.

Looks Great:o))

Thanks!

Awesome everyone! I will be sure to resize as soon as possible.

Thanks for the feedback :)

I agree with msdj8163, the header image and title is a bit too big, That's all everything else is good.

Thank you for your feedback! I actually just changed the dimensions of the logo. Tell me what you think please :)

Hi Jonathan,

Nice site when I navigate through. But, I agree wit Debbie the header image is too big.

Terenzia

Thanks for looking at my site. I just changed the logo dimensions and would love to get some feedback on it. Thanks :)

I took a look at your website. The header picture is too big for the website. You need to downsize the picture or find a picture that will fit in the space provided. The article was interesting to read. Debbie

Thanks for reading and I just changed the logo's (that's the header pic, right?) dimensions. Take a look and let me know if it is still too big.

Thank you for your time :)

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So for the past two days, I've been working on part 2 of the second certification course. Don't know if its just me, but did anyone get stumped on the writing of the content for

Hi Jon, nice looking site, it matches your niche. You've done a very informative content, images should be a breeze. Have a good one,
www.modestlyjen.com

Thanks for taking the time to look at it :)
I love the layout of your website. It's very soothing and easy on the eyes!
If I had one recommendation, it would be to bold your points in your posts. It helps give them a little more emphasis and will catch the eye of the reader.
Other than that, your content is on point! It is very personable yet you provide a whole lot of value in the post. Also, the images you used in "Live a Balanced Positive Life" are really awesome. Really engaged me throughout the time I was reading and was super relevant to your content.
I really like your posts so far! Keep up the good work :D

Hello Jonathan....I am at the same point as you are in the training. My site appears similar with text but not many images, yet. I agree with others *and the same has been said about mine* Your site will look better with more images. Nice content and well designed.

I definitely agree with the pictures. I'm not sure where it is covered in the training certification course as I am trying my best to go in order. Maybe I'll just start uploading pictures when I'm finished writing my third page of content.
Thanks for your input :D

The slang was a bit much for me too, but remember that this is part of your online personality. There ARE people that have successful blogs like this, and if you develop a reader base, they can even learn to look forward to it. Have you heard of the Salty Droid? He writes about scams and has a really weird way of writing, but people love it.

The posts were really well designed - easy to ready, nice use of titles/bold, and plenty of content/pics. You even had a great call to action at the bottom asking for comments. Nice!

Thanks for your feedback! No I haven't heard of Salty Droid but I did just read some posts by him and he is rather vulgar. He was definitely funny in some spots but his style of writing is a bit questionable.
I think I will definitely tone down the slang a bit because maybe it is a bit too informal.
In the coming days, I will be working through the training certification course and follow along. Not sure where he covers the uploading of media in there, but will do so when it is brought up.

Wow, you're quite a young powerhouse, J!

Haha thanks Suz! Whenever you get your site up and running, let me know! I would love to take a look at it :)

You bet I will...I was sooo proud yesterday when I got a video put into my page....then, I began my backtracking overthinking, make it perfect thing - and it disappeared. Do NOT know what I did - but I saved a tutorial so I can do it again today. Bizarre.

Thanks for your support - you're the Man!

Suz

Thanks so much for your feedback! Most of my readers are targeted to be in the United States but I suppose I could get readers where their first language is not english.
I will take out some slang words and will definitely stop using and correct the "..."
Appreciate the time you took to read it!
Thank you again :)

Are your target Readers all American, if not revise your Language. i would suggest to keep it familiar and direct, but less "slan-ish". I would suggest also tidying up the layout, .... at the beginning of a phrase look bad.
i quite enjoyed the content, even if I am not a poker player (but my son is....). I hope I have helped

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Certification Course 2! Slow and Steady Will Win the Race!... hopefully

Certification Course 2! Slow and Steady Will Win the Race!... hopefully

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So for the past two days, I've been working on part 2 of the second certification course. Don't know if its just me, but did anyone get stumped on the writing of the content for

Hi Jon, nice looking site, it matches your niche. You've done a very informative content, images should be a breeze. Have a good one,
www.modestlyjen.com

Thanks for taking the time to look at it :)
I love the layout of your website. It's very soothing and easy on the eyes!
If I had one recommendation, it would be to bold your points in your posts. It helps give them a little more emphasis and will catch the eye of the reader.
Other than that, your content is on point! It is very personable yet you provide a whole lot of value in the post. Also, the images you used in "Live a Balanced Positive Life" are really awesome. Really engaged me throughout the time I was reading and was super relevant to your content.
I really like your posts so far! Keep up the good work :D

Hello Jonathan....I am at the same point as you are in the training. My site appears similar with text but not many images, yet. I agree with others *and the same has been said about mine* Your site will look better with more images. Nice content and well designed.

I definitely agree with the pictures. I'm not sure where it is covered in the training certification course as I am trying my best to go in order. Maybe I'll just start uploading pictures when I'm finished writing my third page of content.
Thanks for your input :D

The slang was a bit much for me too, but remember that this is part of your online personality. There ARE people that have successful blogs like this, and if you develop a reader base, they can even learn to look forward to it. Have you heard of the Salty Droid? He writes about scams and has a really weird way of writing, but people love it.

The posts were really well designed - easy to ready, nice use of titles/bold, and plenty of content/pics. You even had a great call to action at the bottom asking for comments. Nice!

Thanks for your feedback! No I haven't heard of Salty Droid but I did just read some posts by him and he is rather vulgar. He was definitely funny in some spots but his style of writing is a bit questionable.
I think I will definitely tone down the slang a bit because maybe it is a bit too informal.
In the coming days, I will be working through the training certification course and follow along. Not sure where he covers the uploading of media in there, but will do so when it is brought up.

Wow, you're quite a young powerhouse, J!

Haha thanks Suz! Whenever you get your site up and running, let me know! I would love to take a look at it :)

You bet I will...I was sooo proud yesterday when I got a video put into my page....then, I began my backtracking overthinking, make it perfect thing - and it disappeared. Do NOT know what I did - but I saved a tutorial so I can do it again today. Bizarre.

Thanks for your support - you're the Man!

Suz

Thanks so much for your feedback! Most of my readers are targeted to be in the United States but I suppose I could get readers where their first language is not english.
I will take out some slang words and will definitely stop using and correct the "..."
Appreciate the time you took to read it!
Thank you again :)

Are your target Readers all American, if not revise your Language. i would suggest to keep it familiar and direct, but less "slan-ish". I would suggest also tidying up the layout, .... at the beginning of a phrase look bad.
i quite enjoyed the content, even if I am not a poker player (but my son is....). I hope I have helped

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