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Hello everybody!!, I can't get over how wonderful WA is and how supportive the owners and the community are! They're here whenever you need them

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Would like as much constructive criticism as possible in order for me to improve my site and make it as good as it can possibly be. Go ahead and give me a list of things i need

Your writing is informative, and you speak from a personal experience, a good thing.
My only suggestion is to make your "about me" page more about why you started your website. I think the whole TLM can be made into a post, instead of "about me" page.

I can say that the site has genuinity. Technical suggestions are many already.

It's good. The content is rich. It can be improved by adding more pictures and videos if possible. There are visitors who can get turn off by words. They might prefer visual content like videos and you can cater for them. Just my 2 cents worth advise. You've done a great job!

I think you have some great content but you can't really tell that from the home page, which appears to be About Me. I think in this case your About Me should be a little beefier, a little more of your story to give people some hope that they will find what they are looking for in your content. So what I'm trying to say is that your About Me can be your home page, it just needs to be stronger, more compelling.

It is bright , simple and light coloured, but I am not a specialist to give you criticism.
I think your info is special.

Ii liked the site for its simplicity but wasn't clear on what you were asking me sign up for.. I read somewhere that columns should be about 2 and easily scanned because of how the eyes work. Anybody know anything about that I would hate to give you the wrong information on that. Good Work Cheers Carolena

I would put you affiliate disclosure in the same page with your privacy policy. only because when people browse your page and they see you have an affiliate disclosure link, its going to turn them off.

I love it/ It is a great and very informative site. I also like how simple and clean the colors are, they calm you and I think that is great for that subject. Great stuff Greggs.

I think there's a lot of great info on your site. The design is simple which is good. I was a bit confused as to what you want your readers to do but after spending some time it came together a bit better for me. Just remember however, that many readers won't spend time doing this and may leave if they get confused.

Best Regards,
Jim

I would put your privacy and about me pages on a sidebar menu.

I was thinking about making my about me the homepage?

It is already your homepage from what I see. So no need to have it on menu. Also would remove site map from sidebar and include it on page instead. You may want to put your recommended programs on a sidebar menu as well for better visibility.

sounds good :)

Would you put the reviews of the recommended products on the sidebar?

Yes. See http://thewealthyboomers.com/ for and example. They are in the pull down menu and also on the sidebar.It's a technique we learn in one of the modules about site layout. You do this by setting up a custom menu and using the custom menu widget.To make the menu just get the links for those articles and include them.

I don't know why anyone hasn't said so before? If they have then they were right on in my opinion. But you actually promote your own niche. So what could be better in your home page than leading with a story on how you suffered from anxiety and then overcame it, right from the very first few lines.
I really liked your content & some of your pages & posts were engaging to me. but your front page seems a bit watery at the beginning and i struggled to find any real sense of direction. Also, people suffering from such things as anxiety and depression are mainly looking to address one underlying emotional need. Which is where to find some comfort? So the colors blue & white are probably not the best to use for enhancing comfort. Lastly, i feel like the last column was very feint and so hard to index or engage with myself.
Apols, i feel i am perhaps being a harsh critic here. But the info of your content i thought was really impressive. It was just the layout and visual lack of appeal for me for that particular niche, that i really struggled with.

Regards,

Robin

Thanks for your honesty, really appreciate it :) i know what you mean, I was thinking aboout changing my theme today. Maybe i should set my "about me" as my homepage

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Hey guys, give me constructive criticism :)

Hey guys, give me constructive criticism :)

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Website Development & Programming

Would like as much constructive criticism as possible in order for me to improve my site and make it as good as it can possibly be. Go ahead and give me a list of things i need

Your writing is informative, and you speak from a personal experience, a good thing.
My only suggestion is to make your "about me" page more about why you started your website. I think the whole TLM can be made into a post, instead of "about me" page.

I can say that the site has genuinity. Technical suggestions are many already.

It's good. The content is rich. It can be improved by adding more pictures and videos if possible. There are visitors who can get turn off by words. They might prefer visual content like videos and you can cater for them. Just my 2 cents worth advise. You've done a great job!

I think you have some great content but you can't really tell that from the home page, which appears to be About Me. I think in this case your About Me should be a little beefier, a little more of your story to give people some hope that they will find what they are looking for in your content. So what I'm trying to say is that your About Me can be your home page, it just needs to be stronger, more compelling.

It is bright , simple and light coloured, but I am not a specialist to give you criticism.
I think your info is special.

Ii liked the site for its simplicity but wasn't clear on what you were asking me sign up for.. I read somewhere that columns should be about 2 and easily scanned because of how the eyes work. Anybody know anything about that I would hate to give you the wrong information on that. Good Work Cheers Carolena

I would put you affiliate disclosure in the same page with your privacy policy. only because when people browse your page and they see you have an affiliate disclosure link, its going to turn them off.

I love it/ It is a great and very informative site. I also like how simple and clean the colors are, they calm you and I think that is great for that subject. Great stuff Greggs.

I think there's a lot of great info on your site. The design is simple which is good. I was a bit confused as to what you want your readers to do but after spending some time it came together a bit better for me. Just remember however, that many readers won't spend time doing this and may leave if they get confused.

Best Regards,
Jim

I would put your privacy and about me pages on a sidebar menu.

I was thinking about making my about me the homepage?

It is already your homepage from what I see. So no need to have it on menu. Also would remove site map from sidebar and include it on page instead. You may want to put your recommended programs on a sidebar menu as well for better visibility.

sounds good :)

Would you put the reviews of the recommended products on the sidebar?

Yes. See http://thewealthyboomers.com/ for and example. They are in the pull down menu and also on the sidebar.It's a technique we learn in one of the modules about site layout. You do this by setting up a custom menu and using the custom menu widget.To make the menu just get the links for those articles and include them.

I don't know why anyone hasn't said so before? If they have then they were right on in my opinion. But you actually promote your own niche. So what could be better in your home page than leading with a story on how you suffered from anxiety and then overcame it, right from the very first few lines.
I really liked your content & some of your pages & posts were engaging to me. but your front page seems a bit watery at the beginning and i struggled to find any real sense of direction. Also, people suffering from such things as anxiety and depression are mainly looking to address one underlying emotional need. Which is where to find some comfort? So the colors blue & white are probably not the best to use for enhancing comfort. Lastly, i feel like the last column was very feint and so hard to index or engage with myself.
Apols, i feel i am perhaps being a harsh critic here. But the info of your content i thought was really impressive. It was just the layout and visual lack of appeal for me for that particular niche, that i really struggled with.

Regards,

Robin

Thanks for your honesty, really appreciate it :) i know what you mean, I was thinking aboout changing my theme today. Maybe i should set my "about me" as my homepage

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