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Hey everyone! Can you check out my website and give me some suggestions on how I could increase traffic to my page? Also if you think the layout is good, content, etc. Also how
Hey Bre!
I agree with the comments left by those below. Your My Story page...wow...a little TMI. You should definitely make it shorter and also talk more about Positive Thoughts and Positive Attitudes more than just mentioning it in the last 2 sentences. Since that is the purpose of your website you should end your "My Story" page by telling your readers how you and your website is going to help them to live more positive.
You also need to break up that one big paragraph and make smaller ones with headings before some of them. I have a somewhat long About Me page on my first website about natural health & wellness. On it I use 4 different headings, which were basically preludes to the upcoming paragraphs, you should do something similar. I have included the link to it here - http://nomoreflushots.com/about-me - so you can take a look for yourself at what I did with my headings.
But overall you are off to a good start and I think the niche you chose will be a great help to others. I'm sure your creativity will shine through...after all, you are living in creative NYC, my favorite nearby city for creativity. :)
The page where you tell your story is difficult to read. Break up those paragraphs to no more than 3 or 4 sentences. Every 2 or 3 paragraphs could use a headline kind of summarizing what's to come.
oHi, I think you have a good start. The content on some pages was kind of short, maybe you could add more to it. The page about My Story, I think gave too much detail, I think it would be better if you summarized the points more. Also, the video I watched didn't have any volume. It just seemed like it took a long time to figure out the points. It's just a matter of some tweaking.
oh my gosh, i forgot haha im sorry! It wont let me put in a link because im not a premium member, i will put it on my bio on my profile!
or i could just spell it out...
positive living for young people dot site rubix dot com
;P
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Can someone check out my webite?
Hey everyone! Can you check out my website and give me some suggestions on how I could increase traffic to my page? Also if you think the layout is good, content, etc. Also how
Hello friends! I need someone to check out my website and share your opinions and suggestions on all aspects. My URL is:
incomeofchoice.siterubix.com
Look forward to some advise...
Thanks!
Sam
Hi! Just took a look and left a comment on the page. Feel free to to return the favor.
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Hey Bre!
I agree with the comments left by those below. Your My Story page...wow...a little TMI. You should definitely make it shorter and also talk more about Positive Thoughts and Positive Attitudes more than just mentioning it in the last 2 sentences. Since that is the purpose of your website you should end your "My Story" page by telling your readers how you and your website is going to help them to live more positive.
You also need to break up that one big paragraph and make smaller ones with headings before some of them. I have a somewhat long About Me page on my first website about natural health & wellness. On it I use 4 different headings, which were basically preludes to the upcoming paragraphs, you should do something similar. I have included the link to it here - http://nomoreflushots.com/about-me - so you can take a look for yourself at what I did with my headings.
But overall you are off to a good start and I think the niche you chose will be a great help to others. I'm sure your creativity will shine through...after all, you are living in creative NYC, my favorite nearby city for creativity. :)
The page where you tell your story is difficult to read. Break up those paragraphs to no more than 3 or 4 sentences. Every 2 or 3 paragraphs could use a headline kind of summarizing what's to come.
oHi, I think you have a good start. The content on some pages was kind of short, maybe you could add more to it. The page about My Story, I think gave too much detail, I think it would be better if you summarized the points more. Also, the video I watched didn't have any volume. It just seemed like it took a long time to figure out the points. It's just a matter of some tweaking.
oh my gosh, i forgot haha im sorry! It wont let me put in a link because im not a premium member, i will put it on my bio on my profile!
or i could just spell it out...
positive living for young people dot site rubix dot com
;P
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I already have a personal website, can I add to that one or do I need to create a new one?
You can add subdomains....not sure if I am answering you correctly.
These links may help: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/the-mystery-of-subdomain-solved/how-to-create-a-subdomain-at-wa and
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/the-mystery-of-subdomain-solved/when-to-use-a-subdomain
What is your question exactly? If you want to know if you can transfer a website you own to WA hosting, the answer is yes.
Can you add a website that youve already created?
I already have a personal website, can I add to that one or do I need to create a new one?
You can add subdomains....not sure if I am answering you correctly.
These links may help: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/the-mystery-of-subdomain-solved/how-to-create-a-subdomain-at-wa and
https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/training/the-mystery-of-subdomain-solved/when-to-use-a-subdomain
What is your question exactly? If you want to know if you can transfer a website you own to WA hosting, the answer is yes.
Hello friends! I need someone to check out my website and share your opinions and suggestions on all aspects. My URL is:
incomeofchoice.siterubix.com
Look forward to some advise...
Thanks!
Sam
Hi! Just took a look and left a comment on the page. Feel free to to return the favor.
https://amz-discount-code-deals.com/discount-codes-amazon-purchases/