Need Suggestions for my Ad
Here is an that I use are there any suggestions?
STOP!!! Don't Lose another Dollar trying to make Money online until You go to "WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY".
In other words Learn to Earn at "WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY"!
The Faculty has many years of experience and the lessons will cover every subject that any Affiliate could ask.
Then talk about a Student Body that is Happy, Encouraging and ready to Help, it's at "WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY" !
WEll enough said, just come on over and experience for "FREE" what WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY can teach You.
So You don't Lose another Penny unless of course You don't mind loosing Dollars and one has to doubt that.
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Dear Brady,
In the same spirit as Wayne, and the other respondents on this blog, I would like to suggest that you take a great deal of care with precise wording and spelling…… These issues can make or break an advert and need to be carefully considered as they help to establish your authority.
Your advert needs to be letter perfect as it is often the first impression of W.A that a new person receives.
Kind regards,
~Arthur
I fully understand after creating/ building/ and selling my own Brick & Mortar bus. for the last 40+ years. That's why I am Open to suggestions. Thanks
My advice is to keep refining your wording. Almost everything can always be improved. Make sure you always edit it for spelling and grammar. Getting input from the WA Community is an excellent resource. Always be grateful for the good and bad critiques. We want you to succeed. - Wayne
Since the day I Happily discovered WA I have been very Grateful for all the Help and New Friendships that we have made here.
The ad looks good Brady! Just one suggestion: Your last line the word "loosing" should be losing. Outside of that it would catch my attention if I saw this ad!
Learn to Earn at "WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY"!
I would say
Learn AND Earn at "WEALTHY AFFILIATE UNIVERSITY"!
And I guess you are talking to outsiders. I miss the how and what.
Perhaps a line in the message that it's about creating a website and affiliate marketing?
I would incorporate "live support" and perhaps something about free members earning recurring monthly income, only upgrade when you're ready.
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