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I've made my 1st Website now in test, could you please have a look and if you like to comment what does it missing or what do I need to add? Link is thebestwaymakemoneyonline.com

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Hi there Asamad
Well done and congrats
You have made a great start to this project
Just keep adding more and more content in the form of pages or posts and you will be OK.
Also dont forget to add some interesting images that will relate to the website
Best wishes nad good luck on your great journey
Cheers........PB

I thank you very much for your encouragement I'll do that in the next few days. My regards.:)

Hi Amamad,
I wrote up a great comment on your website. It looks like it did not go through. As a recruiter for an interactive AD agency, I hired folks from: SEO, SEM, Interactive web designers, account folks, Social Media, Media,web developers, etc (all were interactive). But I have never seen a website like yours!!! It just blew me away!! From Steve Jobs and Bill Gates to a slew of other people. I loved it!! So much creativity and and artistic!! I am creative and a poet and can therefore recognize it immediately!! It's fabulous!!
Thank you!!
cheers,
Jeanine:)

Its my Pleasure and honer to hear from you this comment, I highly appreciate it. Accept my best wishes and compliments to you, many thanks. Looking forward to receive your comments again. :)

Hello and you must have the title on the front instead of the word HOME also the pop up keep coming on and you have to adjust the settings so it only come up once I think is better also the about me needs a new version happy smiling pic of you and you need to use paragraphs as it runs on and on but good start!!

Thanks paul, I like this comment, it shows me the way how to go up as a blog writer. thanks for your time commenting. :)

Looks good to me except for some English grammer and spelling, but I'm no expert. Just started myself

I look forward for a good english spelling check. Thanks.

You have made a good start Asamad !!

Thanks Rob, for liking. Wish you a big success.:)

Hi Asamad,
I agree with the others on the popup.. that can be disconcerting and cause users to click off.. I personally like to check out a website before I join.
Best of luck with your website.:)

Thanks Kathi, I'll review this in the nest few days. I appreciate the time you spent commenting. :)

Hi Asamad,
You are very welcome.. Good luck with all you do!

Hi Asamad,

You've gotten off to a great start with the website! When I built my first site, a web designer suggested that I do a couple of changes. I'll share them w/you:
1) Privacy, TOS, Contact links all go on site footer
2) Paragraph justifying helps for easy viewing
3) Add a couple of more graphics to break up text blocks

Hope these suggestions are useful to you, too. Wishing you lots of success.

Best wishes,
Joene

Thanks, Joene. These are marvelous adjustments, and I think I need them as well here. Your assistant is appreciated. :)

Hi, I agree with not having a pop up sign in with every page, it's too much. Your About Me page just needs to be made into more than the one paragraph.

Otherwise the rest of the pages look good and are spaced out well with the bold subject headers.

Eventually change 'admin' to your name and add a picture also.

It takes time, I'm new here and did the same with the paragraphs at first for the first page I did. We learn a little bit every day.

Patsy

I appreciate your comments Patsy ,but does the pop up sign in worked well with you at the first page? since I were afraid they won't show.!! , Many thanks.:)

Yes, the first page is your landing page which is the FIRST page everyone sees. So the other 2 will be confusing for them since they already entered their email address. It may look 'fishy' to customers.

Thanks its good comment, I like it.I'll always consider this in my future writing. :)

Looks like website needs a title. Are you sure you want the same pop-up window opening with each page? I would break up text with white space, as Gary suggested, and also use a few more images.

Yah it nees title, no I need it for the time being to open on 1st opening of website..Thanks for your time commenting...Wish you all success. :)

Looks like a good start Assamad, try to allow more white spaces between your writing to make it easier to read, insert. Pic of you into your about me page it will help to build trust in your visitors, all success going forward

Thanks Gary your comments are welcomed.That a nice valued comments. Cheers.

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