The first real post on my website!
Yay, I finished my very first post on my new website, which always feel like a mile stone. It was a joy to write the content. The post is about what the secret is behind the Law of Attraction and I really passed the 1000 words goal, actually, it's over 1600 words! Obviously it is not as good as a native English speaker would write it, but within time I'll improve my skills!
I look forward to writing many more. Writing is a passion and the Law of Attraction niche I have chosen is a passion too. So the two of them together make the perfect couple!
If you're curious about my first piece of art, then go here: https://loahelp.com/what-is-th...
I am open for your feedback! Please be brutally honest, I can have it, I don't feel offended or so. I'm open to improvement and a great reading experience for my visitors. Quality is what I want to offer, so any feedback, tips, etc. are very welcome! Thank you!
PS: I submitted it to the site review, but that was a disappointing experience, I only got a few lines about how nice the picture was and that the content was great. Nothing more than that. I asked for a content review... So I won't do that again, because I gave detailed feedback to the websites I visited and gave my review on. It took me a lot of time and the person giving me a site feedback obviously didn't even spend 2 minutes on my website.
So I'm sorry, I don't want to sound negative, because I'm not, but I'm honest about my experiences and this was the first less nice one. It happens. But I won't invest my time there anymore.
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Dear Anja, i thought that your info was right on the money. I liked that you used science to explain LOA. You used links to other info sites which is good. Id never heard of Nightengale! I learned something new! Keep it up!
Hi Marsha, thank you! You should definitely listen to Earl Nightingale, although it's a little bit old material, it's still very true stuff and his wisdom is great! I learned so much from him. He left the Earth but his teachings will always remain! Happy Sunday and all the best to you!
Thank you Jay, I like it that you pick up the thought provoking thing, that's part of my intentions for the website! Have a lovely day!
Anja, head-scratching is the best thing about life. Two (2) sides of every coin, the other side of the story, etc... Keep it going. Jay
Yes I agree Jay! And those both sides are connected, they might look totally different, but they really are not. In the middle they meet each other, so that's some head-scratching brain gym for you hahaha! Cheers! ♥
Great job, Anja! It's always a good feeling when we accomplish a goal.
By the way, your use of English seems to be just fine. I always admire those who have to learn English as a second language.
All the best to you,
~Bob
Thank you so much Bob! I appreciate your feedback! I Love to improve my English & my writing style. Writing is my passion and I look forward to adding more beautiful content. It is so great I can simply ask people here to give me a little feedback, because I really want to create a quality website, where people feel at home, and where they can get great information!
Happy Friday to you! Just let me know if I can return a favor. I'm more than happy to support you with whatever you need.
Awww thank you for that, that is so sweet of you! Just let me know if I can do anything in return, like commenting or so, just give me a shout and I am very happy to return the favor! Have a great Friday!
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Since you are not a native English speaker, this is very good work! My only criticism would be too many exclamation points.
I can see that you are very passionate and excited to share your information, but if you accent every sentence with an exclamation point, your content loses emphasis. I know, because I write like that, too!
When I go back and proofread my stories, I remove the extra exclamation points and it is much easier to read. Try to only allow one exclamation point per paragraph - just pick one sentence in each paragraph to emphasis with an exclamation point.
That is really great advice BusyGirl, very helpful, I wasn't aware of it! I am going to adjust it, because you are right. And yes, we have the same writing style then, I am passionate and enthusiastic and sometimes I go wild, hahaha. Thank you so much! I'm going to add you to my network.
I just removed a lot of these exclamation points. I really didn't realize how much I used hahaha, it looks much better now!
Have a beautiful day! ♥
I just read it and I am thankful! Thank you so much! I replied to you and it's now visible. Have a wonderful day! Just let me know if you need help. I'm more than happy to support with whatever you need!
Your welcome! Thank you Anja! Appreciate the connection and kindness to offer offer your assistance when needed.
Thank you,
You're so very welcome Ed! Enjoy your day! I'm about to go and do more WA work and learning now!
Here is my feed back and I also left you a comment to get you started. My feedback on you page is it is absolutely wonderful it had my attention the whole time the picture was nice the links are in all the good spots it really looks good.
Wow, thank you, I appreciate your kind feedback! Was there anything I could improve? In the writing style or so, because English is not my first/native language. Although I do speak English a lot. But still you know... I don't want what I write on my website to look awkward ;-) Have a great Friday!
I always ask for general feed back on there and I always. Get really discriptive feedback try that before you get to discouraged. Ill go check it out and give you feed back right now.
Thank you again! I appreciate it a lot! For the general option I wait till I have more content and a good site structure. So in a few weeks I might try it out again and give it a second chance. This time I really wanted to know if the content itself was okay. Because it is the most important part of your business. People need to trust you and feel that you are an authority person. If I can do anything for you in return I'm very happy to do that. Please give me a shout if you need anything like a comment or a review of something (no credits asked hahaha!)!
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Congrats, best to you and God bless.
Mike
God Bless Mike and thank you for the congrats! I wish you a beautiful Sunday! ♥