My Campaign VLOG!

Last Update: September 17, 2013

Hey y'all! Just made this campaign VLOG and I would love to hear feedback!

Thanks so much in advance!

http://youtu.be/XB_wYV8qi-4

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okydoky Premium
That was very well presented Seraina. I think that has the potential to convince a lot of your viewers to take up the free membership. The point that people mentioned about the link is a valid one. Perhaps more about the benefits as suggested by baruarajat as well but, overall, you presented it well.
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SerainaLee Premium
Thanks so much for the insight! Yeah, I agree- it needs to be spiced up a bit.;-)
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baruarajat Premium
Hi Seraina, I went through your video. You have done a good job.However, the video does not talk about how exactly someone will get benefited.I would have given more emphasis on website building(Build my website) and then talked about keyword search and optimization. The link to join is hidden in show more tab. If you can bring that in first 2 line will be great. The link is taking us to Your WA profile page and not to sign up page.. Was that intentional or you wanted people to land on membership sign up page?.
Best of luck.
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SerainaLee Premium
Awesome, thank you so much! Similar to what techhound mentioned below and I totally agree with you. It's hard to see errors in your own work sometimes but then when someone else mentions it- it seems to stare you right in the face! In the next video I will focus on website building, keyword search and seo. In addition I will fix that link (no it wasn't intentional and thanks for catching that). Again, I truly appreciate your help and I am eager to help in return so just let me know if you need anything!
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Grippy Premium
Hi Seraina well done with the video clear and concise Cheers
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SerainaLee Premium
Thank you for taking the time to watch and comment! You're feedback is always helpful and much appreciated!
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techhound Premium
Hey Seraina,

I went through the video. You really have an awesome media voice. It got me to listen to your message. But the video itself didn't connect as much as I would have liked. The video gave a bunch of features of WA but didn't portray much of the benefits of how WA is going to transform you viewers' lives. I think if you concentrate more on the benefits and how they can help your viewers, along with that awesome media voice, you'll have a seriously winning video.

Also, you may want to put the link that's in the description right on the first line. Otherwise, it gets lost in the Show More which people don't always do. Further, in the video itself have a closing frame that tells the viewers to click on the link in the description. If you're planning on displaying on YouTube (as opposed to on your website) then let that ending message go on for a bit (like 20 to 30 seconds).

Best Regards,
Jim
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SerainaLee Premium
Jim,

First I want to thank you for taking the time out of your day to look at this and I appreciate your thoughtful encouragement. The insight you provided is exactly what I was hoping for but more! I didn't think I connected enough either. In your review of my post , it looks like you were able to pinpoint the very thing I was missing- more benefits of WA. Agreed, the link needs to be more prominent. This was so helpful and I will apply all of it to making a better video. Thank you so much and let me know if I can help or review something for you in return!

Seraina
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pcook410 Premium
Great job, Seraina,
I liked the way you took potential members on a tour of what is offered here. Hopefully it will whet their appetites for success in online marketing. Your voice is very pleasant and believable.

Pat
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SerainaLee Premium
Thanks so much for looking it over! It's my first vlog and I know I have a lot of things yet to learn about it but hopefully this is a decent start! Thanks again for your time and let me know if there is anything I can do for you in return.:-)
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