I am no expert so I will give you my view as a potential customer for your product and I would have probably clicked out of your site for these reasons .It was way to long and there was way to much information such as price and not enough of visuals the paragraphs were to long there were a couple of clerical errors and I lost interest in what you were trying to show me . I hope that I have not insulted you like I said in the beginning I am no expert here I only want to make you see your potential I think you have potential to have a very successful web site and I look forward to seeing you succeed all the best

Yours second page on "extra income" is great, images are relevant to your content you have split your paragraphs with subheadings and added some links that's cool. also you have indented some content to give relevance to your paragraph. The only advice I would give you on this page would be to give it a bit of colour maybe change the H3 headers to a different colour maybe green to give it reference to the colour of money this way your text, content, images and overall flow will come together giving a greater experience for your visitors. that's how you get them to come back to your site your content and relevance gives your viewers an experience that want them to come back and read more and investigate your site more. that way your Organic traffic will increase. some more food for thought. Again great effort on this page awesome

Hey there Sean I just looked at your shutterfly blog, and I thought maybe having some card images with the paragraphs would emphasize the content you are trying to explain to your viewers. Also making your Header Tittle a big bolder maybe a different colour or even a different font might give it more of an impact there is a saying that "you have 10 secs to get me interested otherwise I'm out of here" , getting your visitors attention and keeping it Is so important To be honest its quite plain and needs some sort of kick to get me to actually keep reading it. I hope I have given you some food for thought and I know you will only improve each and every day.

Easy to follow, informative.

Looks good. Personable, lots of info,well written.

Hi Sean, you have surprised me! You are doing Great! And remember, every post, you add a new keyword, brings you closer to page one on Google:) Left you a comment, Loes

Sean, nice job with your site. The shutter fly post is timely at this time of year when people are looking for card, gift and photo ideas - so with good keywords, it should attract traffic.

I liked the article for creative ways to earn extra income. You have some unique ideas. Again, it is something people would search for, so well done.

White space on a site is good, but the space between your post title and where you text begins seems a bit too wide for me, at least when I view it in Firefox.

Your site is easy to navigate and has great content. Kudos! ~Jude