Feedback Please
Hello Everyone! So I think I might be doing things a little bit differently as far as my WA bootcamp website and I created an overview of my plan and would like some input on it. Also as far as other information on my website I will be adding other work at home opportunities, Ways to save money, motivational techniques and inspirational quotes and pictures to keep you smiling and motivated. Any input is much appreciated. completelyup2u.siterubix.com
Your friend,
Rosie
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I agree with Khaos - too many "!!!" in your posts can be a turn off to readers. You definitely want to express excitement, but you can do so without the excessive exclamation points. Otherwise, I think its great! good job!
Hi Rosie and congratz for the work you've done, they are some things that you can do to make this post look better :
1- Adding some keyword ( i don't know where you are on the wa training )
2- Some pictures.
3- Use anchor text for your link.
4- Too much symbols like "!!!!" google don't like it
5- You can use the plugin aboutimizer who add an about me part on your sidebar
Hard to help you because i don't know where you are on the wa training ^^
Goodluck and keep up the good work :)
Hi Rosie,
I like the look of your site and the colours, I think you've made a good start.
I'd like to make some suggestions.
1. I agree with Gary about the CAPS.
2. Try not to put large blocks of text in italics as it will lose its effectiveness the same as the overuse of CAPS.
3. I would try and break the text on your 'about page' into smaller paragraphs which will make it easier to read.
None of these are major things so don't worry and I hope this helps a little.
Thank you so much and I agree. I also plan on doing a 2nd about page to show visitors how I received feed back here in WA to get the training and knowledge to be able to build a great site. My goal as well as part of my theme is to show people WA is an amazing opportunity and it is real since there are so many scams out there. Thanks for your feed back.
You've got a great start here Roseann. I really like the look of your theme. You might want to minimize the use of CAPS and bold as they lose their effect if you use them too often. Also, your affiliate link needs to be entered within the text area so its clickable. Other than that you just need to work at creating more content. Nice beginning! Congrats to you!
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Hi Roseann, I tried to see your site but this message came up. It might just be you have taken it off public view but thought I should let you know,
Hope this is useful info.
Maria :-)
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Ok I see what happened.I had a feeling that it was my old website you viewed. I need to update this info so thanks for bringing it up. My new site is http://morethenonechoice.siterubix.com Thanks once again.