Please give me some feedback on my first review page.
Sorry everyone who tried to give me feedback yesterday. Didn't know I could only have one blog post a day. I haven't been here long enough as a premium member. So when I didn't post my URL. I had to wait until today.
So I am starting over and asking if you could please and Thank you in advance take a look and give some feedback on my first review page.
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I think your site is looking good, see Cathy has touched on a few points , it is very neat and easy to navigate well done to you
Hi OSherrie! The overall look of your site is nice. I've done editing for years and can be somewhat OCD about stuff, so with a quick scan here are a few small things I saw...
-There's no question mark after "Would you like to build a website business" at top of page
-You have the word "legitimate" capitalized in mid-sentence, as Legit.
-You immediately tell the reader it is legit, but I would suggest you build the reader's trust by writing additional quality content first.
-Instead of having a link embedded (I'm so new at this until "embedded" may even be incorrect terminology) with the words "click here", perhaps you should consider having your link embedded with the words "review page".
-Ditto with "personal message".
-Perhaps you'd like to embed a link on the term "get started page"
-Where is your privacy page?
I hope this helps and will ask you to please review my site when it finally goes up. God Bless!
Very clean, concise and easy to navigate. Look forward to seeing it with more content and articles. Keep up the great work.
Hi Osherrie, I have seen your site and I am giving my honest comments:
1. Your site is neat and tidy
2. Although you have asked for feedback on review page, you are yet to write your review page.
3. I shall discuss about your first page. It is mentioned that you are providing some tools. Except for the heading 'A-1 website builder', it is not clear that the tools are related to what. The purpose of your site as well as the page should be made clear to the viewers. Also you should emphasize how your site is going to help them. Definitely it's a good attempt. Concentrate more on the content.
I hope you will take my observations with right spirit.
Hey! There is another way to post in WA, up by your profile pic and your Rank, is a pin icon. You can use it to post as well. Blogs are once a day but the pen posts you can do as many as you want :)
Gave you yesterday my comment. But even if you can't make a second blog, you can always use the reply button on your own blog or even give a comment. And finally you can edit your blog and add the URL. (blue button left corner beside the affiliate button).
I really like your site to start with. I would ad a few more personal photos, but this is my number one site out of what I have seen so far. It has a very nice personal touch, that is why I missed your photo on About. Nice work!