I would like a community review of my site. Thanks in advance.

Last Update: August 15, 2014

I am please to say, I think I have completed my 1st site. Woo, woo.... Now, I would like some constructive direction. http://prosehelp.org . thanks in advance.

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lisa970 Premium
why you put leave comment so many times.out side of that i like it
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lmccoy17 Premium
Thanks lisa970, I will look at that.
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Loes Premium
Hello Linda, I saw your tutorial site, think that's a bit messy, I hereby send you a link to show you another set-up, you can't probebly read it couse it's in dutch but it's about the layout http://www.uitgeefhuis.nl/de-eerste-leuke-reacties-van-tevreden-klanten-zijn-binnen/ greetings Loes
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lmccoy17 Premium
Thank you Loes. I will take a look at it. every little bit helps.
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lmccoy17 Premium
I will translate it.
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KCL83 Premium
Great theme. Looks clean, organized and professional. The only thing I noticed was the order of the top menu, usually we want to keep them in order of importance (or the page you most want your readers to click). Typically putting our privacy policy last. Good job!! :)
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lmccoy17 Premium
Thanks KCL83. I will make that change. Did you see anything else?
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KCL83 Premium
I did see on your Good Legal Writing page that the placement of the picture in the top left sort cuts into your sentence "All words not aimed at making a winning record must go!" This is just personal preference but I would lower the sentence so that it sits right below the picture, so the last two words "must go" aren't floating all alone.
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upsgirl Premium
My first impression is it looks very professional...not cluttered...just the blue on a white background. Have you learned how to replace "admin" with your own name? Your name will give your site a more personal touch. When in Edit, select Posts, you will see all your Pages, click on Quick Edit and there's a rectangular box with "admin", just change to your name and you will do that for each Page. Finally, SAVE your changes. I would move the Privacy Policy to the end of your Pages. You wrote just enough per heading to keep it interesting so good job there. How about a picture for your Home Page? Your links work. Are you going to promote with an affiliate program? Amazon has a lot of cool tools you could use (banners, ads, pictures, etc.). You could add some books and/or audio for your audience. We are always "working" to improve our sites, so it's okay to make changes anytime you feel necessary. Best of luck!
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lmccoy17 Premium
Great. It is good to be here. Thanks upsgirl. I will make the changes.
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upsgirl Premium
I am excited for you...mostly because of your Profile picture...just kidding! Really though...good luck!
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Cali Premium
wow, very complete and a good read also. I am almost wanting the course just to understand the law. Very good.
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lmccoy17 Premium
Thanks Cali, I feel it should be basic education we all missed in school. It is not rocket science however, necessary information. Did you see anything that could be clearer?
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