I would to get some constuctive Criticism.

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I would really appreciate if and of you might have time to just check out my get started page on my site. I feel like I may not be empathizing enough on a topic, or my information is not specific enough. If you have a moment to check my page out for a little constructive criticism, I would be grateful.

http://livingawealthierlifestyle.com/getting-started

Much appreciated,

Donna

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You're doing great. You may not know about these two places, these were setup for sharing your content for review and feedback. You may get more feedback.

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/authoring-writing-content/share-your-beautiful-content

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/getting-started/please-give-me-feedback-on-my-website

I think it looks great and wish you lots of success with it I still have a way to go but I so love seeing peoples progress to gives idea's and encouragement

It's amazing, a lot of creativity around the community. Really inspiring. I have learned a lot, and still have much to learn. Thanks so much for your for your reply.
Donna:)

I like it. You definitely showed me that I have a long way to go with mine

I appreciate that you took some time to look at my page. I still have a lot to do. Just wanted to make sure I was on the right track.
Thanks

Donna, as I was reading, I noticed that you are communicating much better in the second half of your page because you personalized your message, telling your readers about your own experience.

I think if you can put some of that personal element at the beginning as well, and do so as if you are speaking to ONE person, explaining how you got started yourself, it would flow much better all the way through.

Overall, it is good. So keep tweaking it. Don't let it hold you back from adding other content. Your site will continue to improve as you gain more information and expertise.

Nice job. And take care on your long drive ahead. ~ Jude

I appreciate your response. Sounds good. I understand what you mean. Thank you for checking out my site.
Donna:)

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