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Let me urge you, And this is for the new members. For you to achieve your desire here at Wealthy Affiliate you have to undergo fully trainings here in our classrooms and ask questions of any kind.

For example for the last 2 months I have been unable to design my website to look decent, it was not good enough to attract visitors. To be sincere for any visitor who visited it the way it was and now there are quite great improvements on it.

This was achieved through careful learning on our available trainings here at WA.

GET YOUR TRAINING AND SAY GOOD BY TO IGNORANCE!

ALL THIS IS ACHIEVED THROUGH OUR PREMIUM PLATFORM.

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I agree with previous messages. There are 3 niches on your site. You need to separate them and concentrate on one at a time.

I thought is was good, but you might not want to take notice of me, as I am not real far in the lessons yet, still learning, keep trying, the help and support here will get you through, cheers Helen

The good:
You have started developing your website foundation.

The Bad:
You need to edit your content with:
https://www.grammarly.com/

You have niche conflicts:
Three different niche content topics in one Website.

I Would divide them into 3 different websites since
you have 3 different niche topics.

Wow the flashing images and the header distract from your site I just wanted to leave. You may have a good idea but I would start from scratch with your website it doesn't work. I would also get someone with good written English skills to proof read for you as a lot of your sentences don't make sense. Sorry to be so brutal but you want honesty. You do have a good idea as sex sells.

I do agree with Rich9008. You might want to slow the image rotation just a little. You may also want to use this free service to check your writing. http://www.paperrater.com/. Otherwise, you have a good start going on there. :)

First let me say well done on your efforts - its the most challenging to design your website. Now for the feedback

Your Make it Happen is not clear and I could not understand your header

Your flashing images could be annoying to customers

I do not know what you are advertsing

I am not sure if your sex adverts are apppropriate it could lead to a

lot of spam and WA could ask you to remove it .If I were you think of another niche

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