I also noticed a few spelling mistakes...oops Thank you all for your great feedback.

I agree with everyone else's suggestions, otherwise it's a great video. Moves fast but not too fast, Holds interest. Makes sense, although a newbie won't know what the initials mean in the video. I wouldn't have before WA.

Even though Powtoon has automatically added their blurb you have TOTAL control over the description under your video. So I recommend that you put the link to your website as the first line under the video. Delete all reference to Powtoon. And keep making videos. See https://www.youtube.com/c/MarionBlackEntrepreneur for my videos. And ask people to 'Like' and 'Subscribe'. Also see How to Add Call to Action Annotations to Your YouTube Videos for ways to add a 'call to action'. ~Marion

Hi Bec,
Nice video! Just a couple of suggestions come to mind.

Can you get your website's URL in the first three lines of the video description? You probably want viewers to go to your site, not powtoon's.

Also, if there is a way to promote your brand "Employ Your Dreams" a bit more, I think it might be beneficial. Something along the lines of using a special font size, color, or something each time "employ your dreams" appears in the video.

I'll have to check out that powtoon app!

Cheers,
Mark