Please, Feedback on my logo!

Last Update: September 16, 2016

Hello WA Friends!!

So, I decided to make my logo as I am really serious with my website now and don't want to wait.

Can you please give me a feedback? I like it a lot, and that's important of course, but I do want to know what you think about it.

So? You like it?

Also could you tell me if you like it how I aligned it in my website.

www.thekeytoretirement.com

That's important as well!!

Thanks people!! Much love.

Ady.

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NancyHernand Premium
Logo is great. Have you tried using Grammarly? It could really help you with the grammatical errors.
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andreamonti Premium
I did not have. I do now thanks to you Nancy.

I've also upgraded to premium as I figured it's one companion that I should definitely have with my blogs.

Thanks a lot. Ady.
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NancyHernand Premium
That's great, and I'm glad I could help! Good luck to you!
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JudeP Premium
The only thing I'm unsure about is 'connecting the online dots'
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andreamonti Premium
I thought it was kind of "unique".

Usually, I hear - connecting the dots - and since we are online with an online niche, I thought it would be a "cute" implement.
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MelissaA1 Premium
Your logo looks good. Fix the typos and your site will be AWESOME ☺
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andreamonti Premium
Thanks Melissa,

Will do :D
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TexPat Premium
I like the logo and how it is positioned on the website. I clicked through to some of your articles and read through them. My feedback is more targeted towards the content. The writing and grammar needs detailed editing. You use "they're" when you should use "their". I would suggest you have someone read everything in the website and clean up the bad grammar and word usage. To me, when I read things like that I question the writers level of education.
Please take this feedback in the spirit it is given. I know I am a stickler for that kind of stuff so it would be interesting to hear if others agree or think it is no big deal.
The website is packed with good information (I am a newbie at this stuff so impressing me may not be too hard). Keep up the good work Ady.
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andreamonti Premium
Hi Pharrington,

Thanks a lot for your meticulous feedback!
So as Nancy suggested, I installed Grammarly on chrome, and it works perfectly. You were right, this problem has been pointed out a few times before, but I honestly thought it was not going to be a major issue.

On my "about me" page Grammarly has found around 180 typo errors. Ahahaha it was great going through them and be like DDDUHH! That's a stupid one. But yes in order to be professional at it's fullest content has to be near somewhere perfect.

So thanks, I already made some corrections, I will continue tomorrow.

Can you point me out where you personally found this grammar errors?

Thanks again!

Ady.
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TexPat Premium
Ady,
I don't think I will find the time to review all the copy on your website to point out the grammar errors. the app you used will find those and I will be glad to read it over when you have cleaned it up. I can make grammar suggestions at that time (if I find any).
how does that sound? It is great having this community to run things by heh?
catch you later sir.
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E-Udoh Premium
Cool website...so what if you use a green color instead of red?

Overall, I like it!

All the best!
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andreamonti Premium
Hi E-Udoh,

Thanks for checking. I prefer red more. I guess that's a personal thing :)
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