My first Street Article Post...What do you think?
Hey Everyone,
I posted my first article on Street Article last night. Please take a look and give me your opinions. Here is a link
http://www.streetarticles.com/enhancement/kiss-me-you-fool-10-different-ways-of-kissing
The same post in on my website and you can view it here and comment (if you want to)
http://oncloudlove.com/kiss-me-you-fool-10-different-ways-of-kissing
Thank you so much and have a good day
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How coincidental... I just got my first Street Articles article posted too! How `bout this for a good deal...I'll read yours if you'll read mine :-) http://www.streetarticles.com/news-and-society/what-does-our-culture-say-about-todays-tv-commercials
Have a great day!
Your site looks very nice. If you intended your article to be funny, your tongue in cheek humor worked for me. Have you ever heard the chocolate sneeze? Herrrrrsheeee!
I just deleted the Street Article post so the post is only on my website now. I will write a post for SA today
Oh good! Remember SA should be relevant to your website and unique but not duplicate. - Oh and links can't be more than 5 words long
Yep i will have to delete on of them. Maybe the Street Article one and re-write one to put there
Delete the Street Article, not the one on your website! Besides the SA has flaws with your link anyways.
Hello
nice article, though one simple observation is the link text :
Learn How To Charm, Titillate, And Seduce Everyone You Kiss...
it should be more visible, I didn't notice that it's a link actually as it's underlined as the topics titles.
Trye for example a nice click here button.
Good Luck
I give you 9./10 on the geeks scale :D
no actually it's not, you can design it as you wish using photoshop. if you don't have it, I'll be glad to design one for you as you want.
Nice. Please PM me your address and phone number...
OK, maybe not. Nice article, although something is either "the most simple" or the "simplest" but never "the most simplest".
Also, although you'll probably get away with it in the short term, it's not a great idea to post an identical article in more than one place on the Interwebs. Google will slap you.
The advice here is generally to post one or two articles on SA to gain some recognition here, then concentrate entirely on writing for your site. Nice looking site by the way, but the site name could be a tad bigger.
Hey Paul,
Thank you for the correction. I didnt notice it. Also, I didnt know I can't post the same article in 2 places. Wow thanks for letting me know that.
I am still trying to firgure out why my website name is so small. I think i have to go over the very first trainings to figure out why its that way. But thank you for checking it out
Glad to help. Sorry to dump it all on you immediately but I'm one of the site's grammar nazis. Interesting niche too.
As for the site title, the answer will lie in your theme, not the training here. You may end up changing the header at some point anyway, certainly if you're a fiddler like me.
No not at all Paul,
Thats the reason why i posted it, so that i can get opinions and an extra pair of eyes.
I am still fiddling with it and trying to figure it out. Not even my tagline is showing up. I really hope i wouldnt have to change my theme because I really like this one.
Most simplest works for me. It is redundant, but it can bring emphasis to the point being made, if it fits with your style of writing go with it. If it doesn't fit, scrap it.
I just uploaded the theme to one of my sites and deleted the Frau image as you have. Same thing here. The only way to get around it is to design a header (or get one designed) as a 1000 x 250 jpg. and install it under the header tab on themes.
"Most simplest" isn't English, whichever side of the pond you live. It's not optional, and is equal to "Most worse" instead of "worst". Don't do it, no matter how quaint anyone thinks it is.
Thank you Paul for looking into the theme issue for me. I will see if I can get something designed at Fiverr.com I never tried that site before but Im sure its fine.
Gramatical error changed!
"Also, although you'll probably get away with it in the short term, it's not a great idea to post an identical article in more than one place on the Interwebs. Google will slap you."
Hi. I've often wondered about this myself, since I've posted on two or three different article sights before. This is where your comment confuses me, because one of them...Ezinearticles.com encourages the use of their Wordpress plug-in, which automatically sends posts on your site, to be submitted on theirs. That would obviously be duplicating the content. I have done it several times...thinking that unless the article site objected to it, that it wasn't doing any harm. Do I need to say OOPS now??
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I didn't know they all had names. LOL
Yes they all have names lol