Hi Vicky - congratulations for getting your site off the ground.

In my view your 'about me' page is slightly confusing and some things are in the wrong order. (Though it is heart-warming and honest).

Even when people come to your about me page - they want to know what you can do for them. In the first paragraph you say

"My goal is to provide you with accurate information that can be useful in various aspects of your life. If I miss anything, or you have any special requests, Please feel free to contact me "

My question is help me with what? I have no idea and I wouldn't stay on the page to find out. (Of course I did in this case because you've asked people to review it.)

I think you want to promote a 'healthy eating?' - but even by the time I get to the end - I am not entirely sure - it may be a 'healthy way of life'.

So I'm sorry - I would revisit what you're saying - Make it very clear what the site is about and what's in it for your readers.

Hope you understand my feedback.

Best wishes

Beverley

Great- you have learned to take action. Success is certainly waiting for you and I liked your theme and design as it perfectly goes with your niche. Nature, Nature- wow I am waiting. I know you will improve more and make it more relevant to your niche. Are you not planning to have your own domain? Good start and best of luck

Love your site. I was going to pick your back ground. Good job I didnt. Really fresh. Your a natural. Pardon the pun!

Great job Vicky. The page has warmth and personality.

I noticed this sentence: . I do / will eat meat, but I am rather picky.

Just under that sentence you wrote: It’s not that I’m picky, I just know what I like…

You might consider rewording one of them, since they are a contradiction.

May your site grow to great success and bring you great wealth!

I bookmarked it for future 'recipes' to use in my bathroom and kitchen!

Well done .I like your page it is so real. It is perfect to the point when you talk about manufacturing your own bathroom accessories dont drag discussing your own food habits. You may conclude by saying you will be presenting recipes using natural herbs
You will be sharing for the benefit of all of us what nature have for the mankind.Afterall
it's NATURES BOUNTY.

It comes across as very friendly. The photo is a nice touch. You sound like a neighbor inviting someone to drop by. I like it.

Hi Vicky! I think it sounds lovely! There's one reason why I would suggest you visit my site when it's got more content (cheeky I know - but at the time you'll see why) - but I like it. It seems down to earth and it's written in a nice style. I really like that you've dedicated the site to your mom, that does really add a personal touch and I think it helps people connect straight away. I do love the imagery- can I ask you please how you got that look? I really want something similar for mine and I'm struggling.