Full Review of Products - First Attempt
Well that took some effort!
Seriously, if I knew I was going to have to invest brainpower, I might have stayed in bed!
I have just completed my latest post and it took me probably about 8 hours to put together - I had to bring almost everything I have learnt so far in a festival of writing, picture taking and linking. I'm mentally exhausted.
Here it is: http://hikingfitness.org/fleece-jacket-reviews-a-customer-chooses
If you're reading this and think you can spare a couple of minutes - just click through and see if it all works for me. Thanks
I'm going for a lie down....
See you soon for the next instalment of Jon ageing 10 years in the course of 24 hours!
Thanks
Jon
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Nice post with a lot of content. You might want to add more headings like Kyle does on his sample blog "How To Lose Belly Fat Today". He has very short paragraphs and lots of headings which break up all the content into smaller chunks. You already have short paragraphs...maybe some catchy headings.
Catchy headings, mm, that's good. That requires more creative thinking though! Okay, I'll give it a go.
Thanks for the feedback, really useful.
Jon
Your welcome, Jon. I don't have a long attention span but catchy headings keep me reading on ;-)
I took a quick look and read-through. Some of the English was awkward to me, but you're a Brit and I am no expert on British English for sure! The pics look good. Layout of the site is good and clean. I'm not a huge fan of that theme. I started out with it, but found that those huge orange circles got to me after awhile soc hanged. What I feel is the best feature is that table you have at the bottom so your readers can make relevant comparisons. That is something I never thought of for a review, but I feel it's a grand addition. Now get some sleep and age 10 more years by writing another post. LOL
Thanks Carla!
I did a bit of research on the table and got the Plug In TablePress (just search for it in WordPress plug ins) and you just set it up there and import the link. It took a couple of attempts but I think I got the look I was going for.
As for the British English (ha ha, that's called English, by the way!) I do come across as a bit mad whichever side of the pond you are on to be honest. But it is my style and guess I'll stick with it.
As for the theme, I also think you are right and need to address it at some point, but I have other jobs to work on at the moment. Besides it would just confuse me further.
Thanks for the comments - I'll try to be less opaque in future posts.
Jon
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Love the work on the fleece. I live in Colorado, and the cold weather is coming.....can't say I have ever seen a badger on any hikes here.but I have seen elk and deer and other wildlife here.....
I lived in Idaho in the 80s and I've seen a lot more than badgers there too! It's funny that when I'm out walking I would NEVER think about wildlife like that. If we see a deer, it is a really amazing experience! Thanks for the comment on the fleece review, it took me hours and hours to put together, I think I bit off more than I could chew with picking four! Note to self; one review at a time is just fine for now!
Thanks again,
Jon