Feedback on review
Hello everyone, I have finished my first individual product review. I wanted honest feedback on it whether it needs some changes, is this the right approach to writing a review etc. and also some comment love. Here is my review : http://campingforbeginners.org/best-led-lantern-review . Looking forward for the feedback!
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Very thorough review - sounds like you know what you are talking about. That's good, otherwise people wouldn't trust you to give a recommendation : ) I like the look of your site!
Hi Nalin,
Wow, you know a lot about camping, this is clearly your niche and I think you've got success in your future. I love your review. It hits on all the important points except safety. I recalled tenting 40 years ago before the invention of LEDs. The coleman lantern was propane or should that be spelled "proPAIN". It was tricky with the little flame basket that was made of ash and could be broken and rendered useless at any time and the danger implied by having a burning gas bomb in your tent. Ah those were the good ol' days. I think you should have an emphasis on the safety of LED lanterns...another plus. Nalin are you aware of all the broken links on your site? On the right hand side of all your posts you have a column of links, most of which are broken and go nowhere. The rest are connected to a site called "King of Relevant Results" which are ads for mostly IRrelevant products. That's a bit confusing and leads people away from your site. I don't see the value there. All in all a good job with great images.
Best to you,
Stephanie
Hi Stephanie, thanks for the thorough feedback. Actually I just included the ads recently, so their relevancy is less. With time, I hope they will get more relevant.
Very thorough review. One sentence you may want to reconsider is this "If for some reason, your battery becomes faulty, you are stuck." I would reword it or remove it all together. Other than that, it's a good review.
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I give it a thumbs up! Great job! I haven't been camping since I was a kid but I have great memories from when I did!
Thank you Mercedes :)