Ok so I just started my second day a couple of hours ago, and just finished and published my about me page! I revised it a few times before I published it and it looked good to
To me the second paragraph look more of a blog content than an About Me. Try reviewing it once small
The only thing I would comment on, you take quite a while to get to the point of your site; I was quite confused as to where you were going with the 'I'm a lad who loves a pint' routine.
Apart from that though it reads fine to me, its definitely a niche :-)
Good luck!
First about me page, any feedback please?
Ok so I just started my second day a couple of hours ago, and just finished and published my about me page! I revised it a few times before I published it and it looked good to
Just updated my about me page, be sure to let me know what you think. Again thank you for the feedback guys :)
To me the second paragraph look more of a blog content than an About Me. Try reviewing it once small
The only thing I would comment on, you take quite a while to get to the point of your site; I was quite confused as to where you were going with the 'I'm a lad who loves a pint' routine.
Apart from that though it reads fine to me, its definitely a niche :-)
Good luck!
Hey everyone! I'm completly new to this and I have quite a few niche ideas floating around in my head. One I have been thinking about in particular is reviewing and rating prem
Premium alcohol drinks as a niche?
Hey everyone! I'm completly new to this and I have quite a few niche ideas floating around in my head. One I have been thinking about in particular is reviewing and rating prem
Just updated my about me page, be sure to let me know what you think. Again thank you for the feedback guys :)