Review my first about me page? Would be appreciated :
Ok so I just started my second day a couple of hours ago, and just finished and published my about me page! I revised it a few times before I published it and it looked good to me but I want opinions from you guys. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, just please remember I'm a newbie so don't be too harsh on me haha. Thanks :) whatsinyourcup.siterubix.com/about-me
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Hi Darrel. Your about me page looks great. People love to see a picture of you and I like the way you've split up your text with subheading to make it easier to read.
I would suggest that you make the section about why you created the site clear to see, rather than burying it in another paragraph, so visitors can quickly see what they can expect from your site. They may not read your whole about me page so it's important that the crucial information - what your site is going to provide - stands out from the crowd.
Hope this helps!
Mark
Thank you for your feedback and thanks for following mark :)