Need a website review.

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I just need some creative criticism from my WA family. I'm having trouble getting my long tail keywords rank high on google. Just wondering if someone with experience could pin point my problem.

http://thehowtoman.com

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Enjoyed your site.

Hi Brian,
Wonderful site, catchy and yet informative. I couldn't pick anything amiss except for the typo. But then I don't now much about web design as yet. In as far as typos are concerned i think this under : "First you’ll need to get some inexpensive tool"
needs attention
"The tools I used are professional type, so I won’t expect you to paid over $100..."

Otherwise i love site. All the best.

Brian, I agree with Spirit's comments, so I won't repeat his observations.

As soon as I arrived at your site, I could see what your site is about. So that's great. Love your logo, and the "learn to repair your PC" call to action.

The font size in your first post 'how to create a rescue disk; shows up as a smaller
font than the other two posts. I prefer the larger font of the other two posts but that might just be me.

The body text should be the same across your entire site.

You have the makings of an excellent site. It looks good, and you obviously have a lot of knowledge with this topic. Well done. ~ Jude

OK, you asked for it. ;)

First, I do like the layout of your site. I was a bit confused when I saw a graphic logo of a carpenter's hammer for an electronics repair site. But it does look nice and your posts were easy to find. I'd probably prefer to see posts on the home page, but that is a personal preference..

Second, I'd highly suggest putting all your posts into MS Word or some other grammar checker before publishing the post. Perhaps have a second set of eyes read it over. There are several grammar, word-choice, incomplete sentences, etc. in virtually all of your posts. Not sure if this effects ranking, but it may influence your readership and influence if they will trust your opinions. I won't point out specific things here as it might create some duplicate content issues, but if you want me to point out specifics to you, PM me.

On the post about Computer Fan Airflow Direction Tutorial, I noticed that in the text of your post the keyword was Computer Airflow Direction - not quite an exact match unless the keyword was just "airflow direction".

The information and opinions being represented are great. The presentation needs some work though.

I did notice also that on the pages where I was seeing the "What's In My Case" items, the graphic and the text are overlapping and in some cases the text is hidden by the graphic. This can be because of several reasons. Different people use different browsers; different screen resolutions etc. and most sites look very different from one viewer/customer to the next. Try checking your site out on different browsers and in different screen resolutions to see how your customers will see things.

Hope this helps.

Thanks for your input. I greatly appreciate your opinion.

Pleasure. ;)

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