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I'd love any advice or constructive criticism you have for me. This is my first website and yes its still a work in progress but I'm pretty pleased with what I have so far... Just would like an outsiders point of view on it. Thank you all so much! I really appreciate it!

https://colormemelon.com
Tell me what you think. I've been working on it. 😁


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Cool web site! I love the pictures and the menu setup is perfect for mobile devices. The pics are gorgeous. Your writing is very clear and easy to read - but you do have some spelling typos, so you might want to have some one proofread.

I like the home page graphic, they certainly grab a visitor's attention. My only comment would be that the pull down menu on the left is a color that clashes with your home page graphics - so you might want to pick a color for the menu that is an exact match to one of the colors on the home page.

Also, I got confused for a second when I selected a menu option, when I got to the new page it looked just like the home page without any writing. I knew to scroll down to see more but not every visitor will know to do that - adding something to content pages to let the visitor know to scroll down would be very helpful.

Great job on functionality, speed and a visually appealing and fun to read website!

Wendy

Nice goin' young'n! Keep up the great work! Geesh, just to look like one of them fellas makes me blush!
JWR

Great work on your website. Congratulations.

Be sure to add your website to your profile page. List it on the right hand side towards the bottom, under your list of posts.

That is the location we have been asked to place our websites.

You can also add it to your written profile.

Keep on going, you are heading in the right direction!

Cheers,

Susan

Hi Melissa,

Your website is vibrant!

You did a great job.

You have made your site reflect what one would expect to find in a contemporary salon.

By that I mean you have lots of visuals so the customer can look and decided what style works for him. You have created a welcoming feeling with your choice of images and text.

Your written descriptions are fun and engaging.

My only suggestion is to consider changing the lime green text to a darker colour, so it is easier to read. (I think it only appeared in two places.)

I have one question. Will you be featuring styles and items for women as well as for men?

The reason for my question is because the very first image you have is of a woman with magnificent, billowing, psycodelic hair.

That image is captivating, but if the site is just for men, you might want to feature a man's image.

You have already done a great deal of work on your site. You are well on your way.

I will be anxious to check it out as you progress.

All the best to you.

Susan

The styles for guys have, I have to say, are getting out of hand, but, about the site, itself:

When I clicked into your site, I was presented with a LOT of blank, black space and the upper part of an image. (that image needs to come up a bit. It can set over the MENU link)

But you do have quite a bit here; I don't think I would visit this type of website because I am rather set in my ways and a Man-Bun is not something I think I want to have. (PLUS, I don't have enough hair, anyway!)

Beautiful imagery Milissa. You have terrific visuals! If you add a sidebar on the right to allow for further enhancement it will stand out more. Also be aware the rules here state you should post it on our profile and refer to it there!

Thank you for the input. How do I add a sidebar? Oh I thought I did post it on my page.... I'm sorry. Still learning

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