My First Website Done In WA
Hello WA family!
I have finished my website and have the 3 pages done. I know that this is only the beginning and I am very excited that I can do it by myself. I am very thankful to the WA community for being helpful and also most especially to the training here at Wealthy Affiliate. Even though I seldom visit and interact here because of the time and my job, having a full time job, a mother and a wife I have to manage my time. Whenever I have a chance after work when I got home, I was excited to drop here and at least watch a video or even finish a task.
I wish I could have more time to spend here and learn. I admit that it takes time for me to finish a certain task, but I am sure that I will make it even it will take for a while. I can say that it's much better to make it slowly that nothing at all. When I started to work on my website, I said to myself while watching Kyle's video, can I be able to do that? More on writing and English is my second language.
I am not good in English and I am not good at writing as well. In order to have a profitable website it should have a good content and blogging is one of the keys to a successful website. It was hard for me to start the 3 pages, but when I finished them, I feel so good to me. I can say that it was so fulfilling task. I have already started my journey and I am going to finish what I have started until I get a website that I can be proud of. My niche is promoting Wealthy Affiliate, you can check it out here and free to make a comment and suggestions.
My website : http:/www.pickwealthyaffiliate.com
Finished pages: http://pickwealthyaffiliate.com/about-me
http://pickwealthyaffiliate.com/getting-started
http://pickwealthyaffiliate.com/privacy-policy
I enjoy the company of this community, you are all awesome!!!
Success to All of Us!
Mavic
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getting started page:
They will help you whenever you stuck up while you are working on your website or any project that you are doing.
You can change to:
They will help you whenever you get stuck while you are working on your website or any project that you are doing
LOL stuck up is when someone thinks they are better than others, get stuck is when you hit a problem :)
I would change:
Wealthy Affiliate is a step-by-step training to become expert in Affiliate Marketing with world-class tools and Site Rubix website builder needed to be successful.
to:
Wealthy Affiliate provides step-by-step training to become an expert in Affiliate Marketing with world-class tools and the Site Rubix website builder needed to be successful.
I would change:
If you felt frustrated by purchasing an internet marketing products and you discover that you need to purchase additional products or up sells to complete your course, then Wealthy Affiliate is your choice.
to:
If you felt frustrated by purchasing internet marketing products and you discovered that you need to purchase additional products or up sells to complete your course, then Wealthy Affiliate is your choice.
The above 2 changes are grammar related, small changes to make it grammatically correct :)
I would change:
If you get frustrated when you get stuck, they have helped.
to:
If you get frustrated when you get stuck, they will help
I would change:
Help within a community of 100,000’s of users and 1,000’s of expert
to:
Help within a community of 100,000’s of users and 1,000’s of experts
I would change:
Above all, the most and very unique in Wealthy Affiliate is you can ask help directly through private message to the owner Kyle and Carson WITHOUT the extra charge or upgrade to have an access to them when you need their expertise advise. If you are going to have a chance of succeeding online business, then you should get as much help as possible to those that are already gone there, advises and helping hand is all we need when aspiring for success in any field.
to:
Above all, the most and very unique in Wealthy Affiliate is you can ask help directly through private message to the owners Kyle and Carson WITHOUT the extra charge or upgrade to have access to them when you need their expert advice. If you are going to have a chance of succeeding online business, then you should get as much help as possible from those that have already been there, advice and helping hands are all we need when aspiring for success in any field.
I would change:
PREMIUM MEMBERSHIP = This is “best and most desire”
to:
PREMIUM MEMBERSHIP = This is “best and most desired”
Again just little changes to make things grammatically correct :) I have heard english is the hardest language to master if it is not your first language! You are doing great and website is looking awesome.
Just a note on the grammar. I can see the difficulties you are mainly encountering is:
1. plural and singular grammar mistakes.
For example if you mention Kyle and Carson... they are the OWNERS. If you just mention Kyle you would say OWNER.
If you mention 2 things it would be "they are", and if you mention 1 thing it would be "it is"
I hope that makes sense?
2. past and present tense
If you start a sentence in the present (now) tense then continue in the present tense :)
Present tense would be words like: is, am, has, are, become, feel
Past tense would be words like: was, had, were, became, felt
I really hope this is helpful and you understand my explanation? Feel free to ask me to check your future pages, happy to help with the small little bits :)
Hi Lynne! Thank you very much for your time checking my grammar errors on my pages! You see, it was hard for me :). I really appreciate your help.
Lynne, you are such a nice person. I've already changed them all. You are the best Lynne!
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Looking great! I see you have had tremendous help from Lynne:)
Have one little remark, the pictures on your about me page are now clickable, set them to "none"
You can choose between attached file, media file and none
Choose none:)
Hello Loes! Thank you very much! How can I set them to "none"? How can I edit it and make it not clickable? Sorry I know nothing in WordPress :)
Go though this training it will explain all, Add pictures lesson for beginners
Thank you Loes! This tutorial helps me a lot. I've got it. All the best Loes!
You're welcome Mavic, for a lot of things I struggled with in the beginning I wrote tutorials for beginners, you find them here https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/loes/training