Yesterday I asked this question twice once without giving the site address and the second time with the wrong address .
Here is the right address
Hello Lynne. I couldn't find your money page, you should have your links pointing to your money page or you will not realize any earnings. I like your niche. You should do well in that area. IWe have a lot in common, I too have delivered flyers. They are a killer. lol
Good luck with your venture.
Yesterday I asked this question twice once without giving the site address and the second time with the wrong address .
Here is the right address
Hi Lynne, here is a tutorial about requesting feedback: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-feedback
Hello Lynne. I couldn't find your money page, you should have your links pointing to your money page or you will not realize any earnings. I like your niche. You should do well in that area. IWe have a lot in common, I too have delivered flyers. They are a killer. lol
Good luck with your venture.
http;//olderbeginner.com
I need help with appearance etc but would like some feedback on the content and personal style. Also need help with letting readers know what to do
I think your on the right path. Might be a typo in the first line of the About me page but I love everything else about it, including the concept. I'm trying to figure out how to add a theme to my own website because right now I do not see it. Was your theme up right away?
I have looked at your post. I suggest you add some captivating stuff like images. Why do I say so? People are naturally visual so making your site captivating to the eyes will attract more traffic.
Hey! I wanted to view your post and comment but I am getting this 'www.olderbeginnner.com’s server DNS address could not be found'
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Could I please have some feedback on my first post?
http;//olderbeginner.com
I need help with appearance etc but would like some feedback on the content and personal style. Also need help with letting readers know what to do
I think your on the right path. Might be a typo in the first line of the About me page but I love everything else about it, including the concept. I'm trying to figure out how to add a theme to my own website because right now I do not see it. Was your theme up right away?
I have looked at your post. I suggest you add some captivating stuff like images. Why do I say so? People are naturally visual so making your site captivating to the eyes will attract more traffic.
Hey! I wanted to view your post and comment but I am getting this 'www.olderbeginnner.com’s server DNS address could not be found'
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I need help with the appearance and sharpening up the contact information but would firstly like some reaction to the ideas and content
Hi Lynne
I think your niche is a pretty good one and you have put in lots of personal experience so have made it relateable. I think you only had 3 pages of content so far? The landing page, about and privacy? So I think for what content you have so you have written it well. (I read all the way to the end of the post). It was a decent length as well.
You have a nice friendly style of writing that shows who you are.
The one thing I did notice though was the page layout. The content seemed to just be in the centre - as if the page was three columns and only the centre was being used - it meant that only about 6 words were on each line and there was a lot of white space. I enclose a screenshot to show what I mean. The pictures are then quite small as they feel jammed into this column.
Hope you keep adding to it.
Thanks Evie for the feedback
I can see what you mean about the columns but the page doesn't do this on my computer so i am not sure what the issue is. I will try it on my smaller machine and let you know. Thanks again for the interest
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Could I have some feedback on my first post please?
I need help with the appearance and sharpening up the contact information but would firstly like some reaction to the ideas and content
Hi Lynne
I think your niche is a pretty good one and you have put in lots of personal experience so have made it relateable. I think you only had 3 pages of content so far? The landing page, about and privacy? So I think for what content you have so you have written it well. (I read all the way to the end of the post). It was a decent length as well.
You have a nice friendly style of writing that shows who you are.
The one thing I did notice though was the page layout. The content seemed to just be in the centre - as if the page was three columns and only the centre was being used - it meant that only about 6 words were on each line and there was a lot of white space. I enclose a screenshot to show what I mean. The pictures are then quite small as they feel jammed into this column.
Hope you keep adding to it.
Thanks Evie for the feedback
I can see what you mean about the columns but the page doesn't do this on my computer so i am not sure what the issue is. I will try it on my smaller machine and let you know. Thanks again for the interest
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I finished course one - have a website etc started writing first content but have lost my place in the training - I've been away for a few days and can't get back to where |I w
If your'e done with course 1, then it's time to move onto course 2~ Building Your Own Traffic Producing Website Level 2 The training should track your progress, so you just need to click the green button on the left to continue with the next lesson. Let us know if that works for you.
Lynne if you look up and to the left...see the activity dashboard? Below that is a green section which says 'certification progress,' and which course and lesson you are on. Just hit that button and you should be back at where you left off. Good progress so far too :)
You can just go onto to course 2 and course 3 and start Bootcamp if you like! Great progress Lynne!
Are you premium member if so go to certification courses and all the courses are there hope this helps
Where do I go to in training after finishing course one?
I finished course one - have a website etc started writing first content but have lost my place in the training - I've been away for a few days and can't get back to where |I w
If your'e done with course 1, then it's time to move onto course 2~ Building Your Own Traffic Producing Website Level 2 The training should track your progress, so you just need to click the green button on the left to continue with the next lesson. Let us know if that works for you.
Lynne if you look up and to the left...see the activity dashboard? Below that is a green section which says 'certification progress,' and which course and lesson you are on. Just hit that button and you should be back at where you left off. Good progress so far too :)
You can just go onto to course 2 and course 3 and start Bootcamp if you like! Great progress Lynne!
Are you premium member if so go to certification courses and all the courses are there hope this helps
My understanding is that my domain Olderbeginner.com is like my over all business name while websites on different niches are different arms of the business. Is this correct?</
Love WA everyone is so helpful. My visual is same domain = your address to your home and website = your home
Think of it like this.
Domain = LAND ... Can contain 1 or many houses
Website = House ... Has many furnishings
Content = Furnishings ... Video, Audio, documents
You can look at it in a way, that the Domain is your House and the website is your contents. Your website looks good too, Lynne. Regards, Lisa
Domain is the .com address for your website, also called a "domain name". The website is what you actually arrive on when you visit that URL.
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What is the relationship between domains and websites?
My understanding is that my domain Olderbeginner.com is like my over all business name while websites on different niches are different arms of the business. Is this correct?</
Love WA everyone is so helpful. My visual is same domain = your address to your home and website = your home
Think of it like this.
Domain = LAND ... Can contain 1 or many houses
Website = House ... Has many furnishings
Content = Furnishings ... Video, Audio, documents
You can look at it in a way, that the Domain is your House and the website is your contents. Your website looks good too, Lynne. Regards, Lisa
Domain is the .com address for your website, also called a "domain name". The website is what you actually arrive on when you visit that URL.
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Hi Lynne, here is a tutorial about requesting feedback: https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/website-feedback