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Last Update: April 07, 2014

Would you kind people check out my website? Tell me what it needs, in real honesty-no fluff. Try the sign-in. Leave a comment relevent to the comment within the website page. Open a topic on the forum. then tell me what you think. Make any comments and suggestions.Thank you. http://outcrappiefishing.com/

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laurieP Premium
I just tried to look at it and got a notice that the site is gone or for sale.
Please review mine, I also need help CookingTodayStore.com
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TrekTheTrack Premium
Wonderful job. What theme are you using?
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kiliwia62 Premium
Is the site offline or non existing anymore? There are just links nothing else.
Can't leave any comment or suggestion
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rog37 Premium
I am only just beginning to set up my site so I have probably got a bit further to go before the website begins to show properly. However, I really do appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.
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kiliwia62 Premium
Hi rog37, you have to provide the url of your website first. :) than I can take a look at it.
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rog37 Premium
I am viewing my site at http://justjuice.siterubix.com/
Is it possible to look at it and see a tab at the top 'WHY WE JUICE' which is a page i have put up which also shows a picture of me and my wife, Ruth ?
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kiliwia62 Premium
OK rog37, will check it tonight.
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kiliwia62 Premium
Hi Roger,
Here is my quick feedback on your site.

I like the theme and the layout, it is clear and easy to navigate through.
Here are a few suggestion what else you could do.

-- try to use a picture for the header. the header looks a bit to plain. A nice simple picture showing your niche, some fruits, veggies or juice would be an enhancement.

-- make sure that your links and pictures, referring to another site (like amazon etc.) are open in a separate window. You don't want to lose your visitor that way when they click on it. When the link opens in a separate window, the visitor will be still hooked to your site.

--on the HOME page, there is a picture missing, without it looks to plain.

-- the part at the very end where it says custom footer left and custom footer right, this should be removed.

So far it is a nice site and with some improvements this will become a great site. I like the topic about juicing, I certainly will save your site for later reference.

Keep rolling!!!

All the best to you

Sylvia
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rog37 Premium
Thank you so much for all your positive and informative suggestions Sylvia. That is exactly the sort of information I needed!

All I need do now is find how to find a header and then place it on my site etc. All part of my early introduction into website building and the learning curve I must expect.

Serious gratitude,

Roger
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kiliwia62 Premium
You are very welcome. That's way the community is here for to help each other.

Sylvia
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rog37 Premium
Help? Can anyone review my site?
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x4xbazzyx4x Premium
This is great. As a fellow angler myself I really like your site!
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WJC Premium
Hi Lionel. I registered, got the e-mail and password, signed in, and saw my user name in the header. It all worked great! The email was generated from wordpress. Pretty slick.

I found your site to be professional looking and got the impression that I was at an authority site. I like the theme you picked. It felt like I was actually out fishing. Great job!!
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KatieMac Premium
woops tried to register to leave a comment but it took me to your wordpress login page
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lionelp Premium
Katie , that is the login page for the forum.
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KatieMac Premium
do you mean on your site, do not know nothing about fishing do I need to register to leave comment
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lionelp Premium
Yes you would have to register to leave a comment.
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nomda ploom Premium
I love it when we play nice...warm fuzzies all round...
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lionelp Premium
Hello Freind
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tropics67 Premium
Looks great! I would suggest moving the pic to the top of the page and moving the menus from the bottom to the right side.
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annie Premium
I really like it! I live in northern Florida and know there will be a good audience for this, It is very nicely and easily laid out and think you will do very well. I did not notice any product links. Maybe I did not look closely enough. Or maybe not added yet? Good luck going forward.
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lionelp Premium
It don't have any product links yet. I don't feel I have enough traffic yet. Love that you stopped by for a visit. Thanks for your comments.
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posinfo Premium
Hi Lionel, I think that you have landed on a good niche. I have read your home page and believe that I have spotted a couple of small typographical errors that you can look at. Below is a section of your text. Below that is the same text with a couple of small amendments.

We strive to develop a fishing resource for the beginning and experience fishing enthusiasts through how-to crappie articles, crappie fishing tips and crappie fishing techniques.

We strive to develop a fishing resource for the beginner and experienced fishing enthusiasts through how-to crappie articles, crappie fishing tips and crappie fishing techniques.

Best wishes
Mark
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lionelp Premium
Thanks for your input. If you like fishing come visit my site frequently and tell a friend.
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norland Premium
I did look at your site. Enjoyable. I left comments on your 'about me' page.
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lionelp Premium
God bless you Laurie, I know you have many memories made out there on beautiful waters fishing with your family and friends. Some of my favorite sun fish are Redear and Bluegill. Thank you for visiting, come on back when you want to reminisce some more and tell a friend. We’ll talk about of the lakes in MN. Thank You
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techhound Premium
Hey Lionel,
Not much more to add than what others have been saying. Needs more content but you'll get to that. Also, I didn't see a privacy policy. That one is really important and you'll want to add that in as soon as you can.

Great start! You have a well targeted niche.

Best Regards,
Jim
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lionelp Premium
Thanks for visiting my site. I do have a privacy policy, I has trying to figure out where to position it without putting it in the main menu. maybe in a footer menu, what do you think.
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techhound Premium
Hey Lionel,
Yeah, the footer works for a lot of people.
Best Regards,
Jim
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KatieMac Premium
Apart from the comment that Bill made,(agree with) your site is looking great you have done a very good job, keep going
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lionelp Premium
Thanks Katie, Would you try starting a new topic within the forum? If you would I'd appreciate it so much. It would set my mind at ease if I know it works.
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nomda ploom Premium
yep, agreeing with Bill67 on the color thing- it is good to highlight. If you could put a recent posts widget in on the right hand column that would enable visitors to link across to your content- use the featured image and that would give them a visual push as well..

Nicely focused niche, and coming along nicely- good job!

Andy
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lionelp Premium
Thanks for visiting and for your comments. Would you do one exrta thing for me, start a topic in the forum? Much appreciated. Thanks.
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Bill67 Premium
If you can change the color of "Crappie Fishing, Crappie Fishing Tip, Crappie Fishing Gear" at the top of your page as it is hard to read.
Your site is off to a good start. Keep up the good work.
Could you review mine when you have time---Thanks Bill
http://athome9to.com
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mickster68 Premium
Yes I overlooked that myself. Perhaps enlarge the font on "Out Crappie Fishing" just above it as well Lionel.
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nomda ploom Premium
keeping my comments on your site here Bill, as it has relevance in relation to my comments- this is a good clear site, with attractive header font and good use of sidebar widgets to showcase additional content.
The tone of the writing also sits well- great job- Andy
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lionelp Premium
Thanks for visiting and you comments. I will take your advice on the color change. Would you try starting a new topic within the forum? If you would I'd appreciate it so much. It would set my mind at ease if I know it works. Yes I will review your site. Thank for your help.
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mickster68 Premium
Hi Lionel,
I have to say your site is put together very well. I know you still have a lot more content to add in but you are on the right track. I did notice on your home page that there is a blank on the right side of your page below the picture; I am not sure if it is in relation to the theme, but perhaps a widget set up or if your written content can stretch across with an additional picture breaking it up.
I haven't fished since I was a kid (mostly pike, walleye or trout) and I have to admit when I think of it, I think of the sun above and the sounds of the waves hitting against the boat. Very relaxing, enjoyable and rewarding if something gets caught. (Of course if fishing off the dock a cold beer is always a good accessory).
Keep up the great work Lionel, you will soon have a following and your hard work will pay off
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lionelp Premium
Thanks Mick, You have me thinking about that blank space on my home page. If you don't mind would you try starting a new topic within the forum? If you would I'd appreciate it so much. It would set my mind at ease if I know it works. Thanks
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mickster68 Premium
Hi Lionel, I am not sure what you meant by a new topic on the forum for this, but perhaps try what tropics67 had suggested. Maybe that might take care of that blank space issue but either way let me know. I would like to see how it turns out. Cheers
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