Unpublished Article.
Elderly Emotional Abuse.
I know this page isn't anywhere else on the internet as I deleted it on the site, I had put it on, it said "this article can only be seen by my eyes."
I am interested, to have other eyes view it, and suggest what was wrong with it, why it wasn't published? How I can improve it.
It will help me also to write better articles.
If you have a spare minute could I have some ideas please.
The word count is 412, maybe it needed more writing
Thanks,
Elsie.
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I read your article and was very interested in the material. We are all aging and my Mom is almost 90 years old but active and sharp. I can't imagine ever telling her what to do.
If you haven't tried to publish the article on Street Articles, you should do it. I believe it has to be different than anything on your website so you might have to modify it. The information you present is important and I believe you have a heck of a niche.
Kali
Hi Kalllnozarks, I would never had guess, you were old enough to have a mom that age.
Interesting I could write a Street Article, pointing it t that site.
Agreed given the aging population! Not too familiar with Street Articles, although I had a quick look. Is it similar to Ezine Articles Kaliinozarks? Thanks.
Street Articles is a bookmarking site owned by Kyle and Carson. You can get to it from a link on the left side of your WA Screen under the Awesome Services section. They are particular on the things that get approved, so you have to watch spelling, links. and provide good content. I like the site.
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Kiwinana, is this the same one you were trying to publish in HubPages? The sites I suggested didn't help? Will be glad to proof it for you and give you suggestions. ^_~ 0136/5/30
Yes it is the one I wrote for HubPage, I deleted it and put it on my webpage.
Would appreciate any suggestions to improve it. Thanks.
Will copy it, suggest and correct. Will get it in your PM box, asap. 2327/5/30