my website
Hello everyone. I have been working on my website and I would like it if you all would look at it and give me your feedback please.www.safewaytolossweight.org. Thanks
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Hello Julia, I visited your website and found it to be a work in progress. I enjoyed the visit and would suggest three thinks. The first is to proofread your content to ensure grammar, spelling or errors are correct, (e.g. Your about me page I think a word is missing). The second thing I would suggest is to find graphics or photos that will enhance your posts and pages. The last thing is to determine what is a page versus a post. As stated by other members, it would be great if your front page showed a bit of each page or post that you can click on.
Hi Julia, I have tried to load your website but I get a message from the server that it cannot be found. Irv.
Hi Julia, that link works. Youre website is very much a site in progress. I think you could choose a different theme as the present on does not do any justice. Irv.
I've looked at your website and i can see you're getting on well. It's true that the point that was raised by Chris is key and I think it can be corrected in the choice of theme. Some themes don't just display all pages while others do. Otherwise your website is a potential foundation for your online business.
Wish you all the best
Paul
Hi Julia
I thought the site design was clean looking. I read your about page and I instantly looked for the internal link to take to your next page.
I think having to go back to the menu bar might put some people off. If you can work out how each page should be read , then a simple internal link to a word taking the visitor there will enhance the experience.
But you can be pleased with what you have achives so far in looks and content.
All the best
how do i change my menu bar so it can be easier for people to look at so they dont have to keep going back to the menu page.
It'll depend on your theme and how you have set it. I personally like the pages across the top of my homepage with drop downs if the posts are linked.
Unfortunately I'm no trainer on this sort of thing, so can't really talk you through it.
I did think that a link from your about, within the text saying something like "keep reading to find out the secret to successful dieting " would work.
You just type the phrase and go to the create a link icon in the edit page section and then copy the URL for the page you want to link.
This will help the site flow for a visitor rather than going in and out of menu.
Hope this helps, sorry if it doesn't.
Hi Julia,
You can edit your original post, if you like? That way you'll have the correct URL there.
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Hi Julia! I just looked at your site! You are off to a great start, however I have to agree with the advice Harvey Brown gave you in his comment! I had the same thing suggested to me by someone that was nice enough to point it out! Sure enough I had misspelled words and left words out! Congrats on site!
Barbara