Hey Jeremy, definitely taking shape. I would agree that a mowing photo of some kind would add a visual attraction to a potential customer.

Also noted the word "guess" used multiple times in your about me page. It's okay, just seemed a little excessive.

Your off to a great start on the page!

Wishing you all the best in the coming new year.

Andy

Hi Jeremy, good start, your work kit is fine once it does the job!
I think you need to get a little more personal in some of your "about me" writing?
Also like your home place more, after all your customers will bond greater with you if you like where they live too...?
One other think a nice photo of mowing in your logo would help the new customer's "eye candy" when searching for a mowing job!
Make sure you fill in the alt tag on your images, helps google to rank your site.
I'll leave a comment on your site also, which is also good for your rankings.
I wish you well and good luck.

There are tons of great training videos here on marketing a local business. Have you checked them out yet? Just type "local marketing" in the question bar and you'll see a dropdown of all the training videos.

Good start! Neat and uncluttered.