Finally Finished Course 1...Feedback Please!

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Oh my gosh! I JUST FINALLY finished the first course training and now ready for course 2. I felt like I was really lagging behind and procrastinating about getting started with content...but now here I am I just created my first two pages...I would like to have some feedback on my About Me page. please...

http://curvesdeservefashion.siterubix.com/about-me

Thanks for any and all comments and/or advice!

Jen

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Wow Jenny.... we are definitely both on the same wave length with regards to our niche. I think that it is way easier to focus on something that we are both familiar with personally. I am yet to finish my website but its coming together!!!! Awesome work Jen!!!

Thanks, Adrianne, that means a lot, I have been working so hard, but hesitant to really put it out there cause it's not where I want it to be, I have a long way to go, but I appreciated your comment, it helps to hear it from someone who has a similar niche..can't wait t see yours!!

Content isn't going to be an issue for you Jenny. You write well and you're writing about something personal and you're passionate about. So you're good. Just change that theme that you're using to something that makes it easier to read and you'll be good.

Here's some advice I've written about color schemes to use on a blog:

https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/eddysalomon/blog/is-your-blog-a-coloring-book

Hope it helps.

Eddy

Oh my gosh, I've missed you, Eddy! Your positive feedback means a lot to me! I'll take a look at your blog. Thanks for the advice!

You're welcome Jenny!

Yes. The color is too dark. Content is great!

Thanks Arick! I appreciate your feedback! I'm definitely gonna change the theme!

Congratulations! Great start to your site. As others have mentioned, I also find the color scheme hard to read, so you might want to play around with that.

Thanks Faith for the support! Yea I was trying to play around with it last night and couldn't seem to get anywhere..will try again today...may end up changing the theme...if you have any other suggestions please let me know!

Looks really good so far, I left you a comment.
Melissa

Thanks Melissa, I appreciate the support! Gonna go check it now!

I noticed you have a description of bandana, the page layout, that's probably not necessary. Other than that everything looks great so far!

Thanks Lairel! I noticed that too! It must be part of the theme itself. Do you know how I would go about taking it off?

I would go to customize under appearance, it'll bring up all the options for that theme. Having not used that theme myself that is the first place I would start.

Thanks I'm checking it now!

Very pleasing page in my opinion, very good job Jen.
Jack :)

Thanks, Jack!

Looks good so far. Nice About me page. On the privacy page, you should put your email address and website address where it has that placed at. Good Job so far.

Hi Ken,
Thanks for your review! I appreciate your tips...I have to set up an email just for my site..haven't done that yet!

No problem. I just wanted to point that out. Dont' get in a hurry and please always ask for reviews. That will help you on your journey. Take care.

Thanks again! it was like 3am when I was finishing it up, so I'm sure I wasn't seeing it all too well,,lol! Anyway, blessings to you n family!

Hi Jen, I enjoyed your presentation very much, I found it very engaging! Christa

Thanks Christa, I appreciate that!


You're very welcome! :)

Jenny, I really like your About page. You don't give much personal info, except mostly buying online experience, but that's ok....no one says you have to give family, locations, etc..

My only problem (I have vision problems) is that I had to highlight the text so that I could read it.

Otherwise, very nicely done and I look forward to seeing the rest of your site when you're done...;)

Thanks for your review, Bunn! I was just thinking I should probably change the text color to white since I have a dark background..I think that's possibly to do, right?

You're ahead of me, Jenny. I'm sure there's a way, just don't know how yet. Research, or pose a WA question to the group.

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