pain relief from an unlikely source

Last Update: October 22, 2013

Product review for a pain relieving gel and you wouldn't believe what it was meant for

http://mylifepoststroke.com/product-review-2/

Any suggestions on if I need to add or change anything?

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@RICH. Premium
Hey Harvey. I'd also recommend adding this to https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/getting-started/please-give-me-feedback-on-my-website as Members there are actively looking to give and receive help and advice on their sites. :) Rich.
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harvman0 Premium
Thanks as always, Rich!
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BIS Premium
Hi
Had a look at your review. I think you need to add more information because as it stands I wouldn't describe it as a 'review'. Apart from the fact that it is a thin minty liquid and looks like it's for horses I have learned nothing about it - Like how often it's used. , how long did the pain relief last? Where did you use it - on the whole of your back, back only? Are there any disadvantages to it? Who is it recommended for?

I know you have said read the Amazon reviews but you need to give people more information yourself or you will find that people won't bother to click your links.

Also I would adjust the alignment of your text to left

Hope this helps. You've clearly done a lot of work on your site.

Beverley
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harvman0 Premium
Thanks Beverly, it always helps to get the point of view from the visitors side
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harvman0 Premium
Thanks, Beverly made the changes you suggested, but the interesting thing is that I pinned it to my Pinterest board and it has already been re-pinned 23 times and got 2 likes. So, it is getting out there somehow and hopefully people will come to my site to purchase it even if they weren't affected by stroke. A lot of them are fitness boards doing the repining.
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