Just Completed My First Wealthy Affiliate Review
I know It won't be perfect so any feedback at all good or bad would be great :).
A thing to note though is that it's long.....very long lol so it's cool if you's cant get around to it just now so just whenever you's can.
Here's the link.... ( just taking the link away just now until my website is finished )
Oh and I figured out how to place different advertisments in your sidebar for specific pages on your website so you don't have the same ad in your sidebar on all of your pages. I was going to make a video of it and post it here in WA because I was asking how to do this a few weeks ago and nobody knew how. So if you don't know and would like to know just ask :)
My website isn't completely finished yet as some of you may have notice already noticed there's still a few pages I have to add content to just in case some of you guys were wondering lol
Cheers Everyone
Chris
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I think the layout of your article is wonderful. The pictures add a lot of interest to it, as well as draw the reader's eye down through the article.
You could add a subhead under "Wealthy Affiliate University" title. Something like
"Discover the difference", "take a look inside", "11 reasons to succeed"... these are a few types of subheads to use under the title.
I would also shorten 2nd paragraph of intro to something like this. "The review you are about to read, covers the most important details you need to know about Wealthy Affiliate University, so you know exactly what to expect from this program. Hope you enjoy!" _Chris
(I would also make the above, the first paragraph of the intro. This way you are telling people what to expect.... a review.)
You may also want to include your full name (or pen name) somewhere as the author of the article to help build your authority as you grow. That way your articles can be searched by your name. After all, you are part of your brand.
I would also flip flop positions of "What's Inside"(paragraph & title) with "Entering Wealthy Affiliate for the First Time" (paragraph & title)
You may also want to re-read your entire for typos and clarity... sometimes when we write an article or content, we don't see it from the reader's perspective... Read it out loud to yourself...see if it flows naturally... Have someone also read it that knows nothing about what you are doing and see if they get point you are trying to make. see if a paragraph that started in the present tense has somehow ended up in the wrong tense or vice versa. It's these small tweaks that can make a huge difference in the outcome and response to anything you write.
Hope this was helpful and wish you good luck. You are very close. It's a powerful article with a few small tweaks.
Hi mama2Karsten
Thank's for taking the time to read through my review I know how long it takes :)
I have been trying to add a sub heading under the "Wealthy Affiliate University" part for about 2 months now and its been impossible. Its different with the theme I'm using so I gave up on that lol. Although the sub heading would make a whole lot of difference.
You have made some very good points I think I will shorten the second paragraph and swap it around with the intro and also switch the heading's you are talking about cause it would make a lot more sense.
Thanks for taking the the time to leave me feedback these are definitely thing's I can change in my review so I appreciate it mama2Karsten
Chris
You really do have a very nice layout. And I do not think the overall length of the content is too long. I think many potential affiliate marketers have been burnt by the so called "Guru" sites... which makes them skeptical. That's why your approach is so refreshing... it totally overcomes the doubts about WA by you painting a very accurate picture of what WA actually is. I predict you will have higher conversion rate at the end of the 10 day trial for new users because the potential members will see you actually told them the truth. And the truth builds trust. And trust creates repeat customers.
Thanks Karsten I appreciate the advice its always good to have other people's input and the fact you think it will do well makes me feel better about the review lol. I'm going to go make some changes to it just now thanks again :)
Chris
Hi Chris
You're right to drive traffic to your site through articles, but if someone lands directly on your site then it doesn't really make sense because there's no introduction. It only has be a couple of sentences - but I think it needs something. But do get the views of others - they may think different;y. I'm no expert.
Okay Beverley I see where your coming from I really didn't think about that I was just concentrating on the article side of it. But I agree it does need something.
Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it :)
Chris
Hi Chris
Congratulations for all the work you have put into this review.
Three things you might want to think about
1. The font size in my view is too small and therefore quite difficult to read.
2. Your right the review is long and I believe that it is far too long to have on one page and would be better split over several linking pages.
3. You write really well, but I think there is something missing at the beginning. I'm not really sure who you're talking to. You jump straight into the review of WA - but who is it for - anyone who's passing or someone specific. What problem are you solving or need are you fulfilling by suggesting that WA is the place for them.
The best of luck
Beverley
Hi Beverley
Thanks for taking the time to read through my review it is quite time consuming so I appreciate that :).
I will definitely fix the font size that's something I wouldn't have picked up on myself so thanks for pointing it out :)
Okay that's perfect I will link to the review over a few pages I was considering this myself but didn't know how to do it so just left it. But Yeah I think your right it would be better over a few pages.
Well my audience is supposed to be the likes of school college and university students, really just students in general. But the keywords I have for that audience I haven't put in this review because I was planning on driving them to my website through articles for example if I was to write an article on:
online jobs for college students.
Then link that article to a page on my website related to online jobs for college students and have that page on my website link to the wealthy affiliate review, (writing this just now I think I am taking the long route lol) But do you understand where I am coming from ? Do you think this is the right way to do it :) ?
Chris
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Chris, a very good article about WA. You did not leave anything out. Great job! Good luck in your future. It looks to me that you will succeed. George
Hi George
Thank's for taking the time to read my WA review and leave me feedback I appreciate that. And thanks for the kind words :)
Best of luck to you too.
Chris