I have one criticism - the text is too light! It is very hard to read. Your best move would be to make the text black (totally) and make your site more readable. I don't know if your theme has that option but if not, try a new theme! Glyn

Great site i've noticed a few things on there such as the facebook bar and the contact form that i need to learn for my sites so well done looks great

Hi Sarah2121,
Your concept is very good. As I find you are yet to complete many of your pages. I can visualize, when completed, it will become an useful site.
Is it possible to make the fonts more visible? It is dim. I do not know whether it is because of my PC or otherwise. Make it little more darker so that it becomes more pleasant to the eyes.
Go ahead. Best wishes.
By the way write your 'About me' page without delay.

Hm..healthy lifestyle. Interesting..but doable. I read on my mobile so can't see the themem clearly. But the photos are very nice. Can't see the photo on the third post on mobile though.

On the whole a very clean image. Well done!

Cathy

Nice start. I love the graphics. The only thing I noticed (and this is just one of my "things") is the use of you're and your. Most people won't notice though. The following might help. It's a nice site. Handy Grammar Chart

Thanks for the feedback. I'll check those issues.

There is something not quite right with your sidebar ads

James

I like the WP Theme you picked. It's plain and simple and makes your website stand out. Your website banner is entirely relevant to your message.

You also possess a strong writing and presentation skill that aids engagement on your site.

I notice that your link "Mind over matter" under the Believe theme page is broken and you may just want to look at it and fix it.

Wish you success as you continue with your training.

Tich