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Hi everyone,
I just finished setting up the frame of my website and I'm wondering if I did any good.
Little warning, I'm Belgian and struggling with English spelling a
The site is nice and clean. I agree about the personal details in About Me. If this was a personal blog about your daily life, including your age, etc. might be more appropriate, but since this is more professional I'd leave it out
Hello Benji, I like the the "nagging my wife" part of your About Me Page, that part make me smile. About your age, hmmmm.... I think that is too much information to give away. For your spelling and grammar you can use paperrate.com. other than that your site looks great. Nenita
I like your website. I am wondering if you should include your year of birth and height. It is really not necessary to include that information on your website. You might want to consider including how long you have been in IT (over 6 years). You mentioned setting up a system and used the word "him". I word "their" is probably more appropriate. I know from experience that certain languages do not translate word for word correctly. If you would like someone to review your grammar, I would be happy to. I wish you much success.
Thank you very much for the comments and your offer to review my grammar. My next goal is to work hard on the content. I probably will take your offer after that.
Are you writing in message language?... If you have problems just google the spelling, even us English people do that :P
Hi Charl,
Thank you for the reaction.
What do you mean with "message language"? I assume my text isn't fluent enough?
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Hi everyone,
I just finished setting up the frame of my website and I'm wondering if I did any good.
Little warning, I'm Belgian and struggling with English spelling a
Looks nice. Reading the comments below, it looks like you took the advice and removed which was unnecessary. Best of luck!
The site is nice and clean. I agree about the personal details in About Me. If this was a personal blog about your daily life, including your age, etc. might be more appropriate, but since this is more professional I'd leave it out
Hello Benji, I like the the "nagging my wife" part of your About Me Page, that part make me smile. About your age, hmmmm.... I think that is too much information to give away. For your spelling and grammar you can use paperrate.com. other than that your site looks great. Nenita
I like your website. I am wondering if you should include your year of birth and height. It is really not necessary to include that information on your website. You might want to consider including how long you have been in IT (over 6 years). You mentioned setting up a system and used the word "him". I word "their" is probably more appropriate. I know from experience that certain languages do not translate word for word correctly. If you would like someone to review your grammar, I would be happy to. I wish you much success.
Thank you very much for the comments and your offer to review my grammar. My next goal is to work hard on the content. I probably will take your offer after that.
Are you writing in message language?... If you have problems just google the spelling, even us English people do that :P
Hi Charl,
Thank you for the reaction.
What do you mean with "message language"? I assume my text isn't fluent enough?
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Looks nice. Reading the comments below, it looks like you took the advice and removed which was unnecessary. Best of luck!