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Hi guys! I want only to say THANK YOU to WA, because, in less then 1 month full in, give me, not only the right tools, but, what is more important, the burn mindset to start a project I had in my mind for many years.
So, I'm on a challenged road now!...and no stop is expected nor allowed.
It is like as WA allow me to put together, order and use all my skills and give me the force to start and overall believe that I'm able to do it. Thank you overall to this amazing community. I know will be many difficulties, errors, wish to quit.... but I also know that I will return here and find the energy to go on.
What I speak about is https://milacorporate.com. I write it here not to make advertising of (also because it's still early days!) but because I want your opinion on, if you take a look and, of course, a your encouragement to continue, because this is the strength of this community and the value that we all receive every day.
This week I finished second levels domains and start to produce contents....so exited!
I wish you an amazing start of the week and wish you much success and satisfaction!
A big Hug,
Mila
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Overall the look of your website is phenomenal. The only thing that stands out to me since you asked for opinions, is it reads as though you are using a translator to write it into English. The sentence structures are choppy which creates an unnatural flow.
An example would be
"What is freedom would be the primary rule?" This starts as a question with What Is but the rest reads as a declaration then ends in a question mark. The following sentence also read the same way.
If your primary audience is to be native English speakers, I would seek someone to help you make the structures a little better as something is getting mixed up in the translation. Based on your design I would hate to see something like a translator issue detract from what looks like a very professional well put together project.
Some languages (if this is the case here) are hard to translate without a live translator. An example is English to Spanish and reverse. I tried learning it (Spanish)but the sentence structures appear backwards to me and the idea of assigning a gender to an inanimate object also doesn't fit in well. It was enough impediment for myself I gave up trying to learn Spanish.
Overall though, I'm impressed. The design of your site, the layout and structure are simply breathtaking.
Regards,
Jason
Oh Jason! So thankful for your comment and so appreciate it!
You are right. English is my problem. I'm not English native, so it is so difficult for me to write correctly in a natural flow :-(
I speak 5 languages, but no one perfectly! All good to survive, but not to be professional.
And this will be a problem that I don't know how manage successful.
The core mission of the site is to put in, authors from different countries, in their own languages and create a community with a common will to share knowledge and experience in the good of many people.
Hope that I will improve every page with a language that everyone can understand also if not perfect. And in the future be able to pay someone to rewrite it correctly. In the meantime I will work to complete the site and its departments, to be ready and operative.
Thank you again for your comment and helpful advices.
A big Hug,
Mila
Thanks so much for the kind response.
Do I understand correctly this is to be a type of multi-lingual guest blogging site?
Regards,
Jason
Hi Jason!
Mila Corporate is formed with 6 Department (Mind, Help, Health, News, Store), each of these is in a subdomain dedicated.
Each subdomain is divided in Categories of interest and have countries tags. Professional operators of different countries can apply and become an author of a Department. They must write a presentation article with their CV and services and how many scientific article they want on their area of competence, in the language of their country,
...all is in development :-)
Kind regards,
Mila
It's a nice strategy. I've had a similar idea only not as structured or discerning as your own and I imagine for different outcome objectives.
The reason I asked is I'm wondering if the intent of your site (multiple vetted qualified experts/writers) could be the answer to your issue with translation.
This could be an opportunity for you and your partner to consider an expanded partner role for one who would be a good fit for a department. Based on the serious intent of your project, it's likely to attract others of serious intent (Law of Attraction) who would consider it a responsibility they would take on for free to make sure the project shines as bright as possible.
Best of luck in this, it is an awesome project.
Regards,
Jason
Yes Jason! You hit the spot.
The mission is to make Mila Corporate a real small Corporate, where, when the business will be started, we can give different job opportunity to different people, who will become responsible for one particular issue.
In this way I will resolve language problems too :-)
I know that it will no be simple and for sure not quickly, but I must start somewhere! And I'm sure that WA is the right place. The demonstration is your comments and the availability of the other entrepreneurs present here.
Hope will be a success... in the middle I must continue to work inexorable!
Kind regards,
Mila
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I checked your site (thanks for the link). What I see finished is good. A little busy. Some letters could be darker for ease in reading. As you continue in development, watch spelling and grammar to be sure you are communicating well.
Looks like you have a good team. Helping others is always a good plan. Not easy, but good.
Much success to you.
Thank you so much! Yes, all is in development and must be corrected in many parts, but step by step I want to believe that I will be successful :-)
Thank you for advice to darker some words, good idea!
A big Hug,
Mila