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Hi all, I have just create a new website about depression and my experiences about depression. Thanks to
I've left a comment on your site. I think you’re off to a great start and have picked a fantastic niche. There is a lot of opportunity out there to get people’s attention and to help change someone’s life. I think you’re awesome for doing that. ;-)
I would only make one suggestion for now: I noticed a few grammatical errors. I would suggest using a word processing program, Microsoft Word or something similar, to double check your work for you. It will help you gain credibility to ensure your grammar is correct.
For example:
“Hi Readers,
Now you must be wandering why I choose the word Second Chance Freedom.
Some (have) said it has some bad connotation because it implies that someone just come out (has just come from) from prison or someone just paid for the crime and gets a new lease of life.
Well, for my case, I got my second chance because I have found an outlet to attain financial freedom.
I was very gullible in trusting some who masked as something else and re-package(d) it as another product.
To know more about that(,) click here to find out how….”
Hi Kismessydesk, thanks for your help. Will change that immediately. Sorry for the poor grammar.
I too have 2 more post:
http://second-chance-freedom.com/my-experience-on-depression/
http://second-chance-freedom.com/signs-and-symptoms-depression/
I have already vet them but I am be glad if someone willing to point them out.
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Hi all, I have just create a new website about depression and my experiences about depression. Thanks to
I also think your website's theme is very nice and is very well laid out. Kris mentioned something about the grammar I second with that. It's funny how I actually just added a post on my website about having some help with that myself.
I've left a comment on your site. I think you’re off to a great start and have picked a fantastic niche. There is a lot of opportunity out there to get people’s attention and to help change someone’s life. I think you’re awesome for doing that. ;-)
I would only make one suggestion for now: I noticed a few grammatical errors. I would suggest using a word processing program, Microsoft Word or something similar, to double check your work for you. It will help you gain credibility to ensure your grammar is correct.
For example:
“Hi Readers,
Now you must be wandering why I choose the word Second Chance Freedom.
Some (have) said it has some bad connotation because it implies that someone just come out (has just come from) from prison or someone just paid for the crime and gets a new lease of life.
Well, for my case, I got my second chance because I have found an outlet to attain financial freedom.
I was very gullible in trusting some who masked as something else and re-package(d) it as another product.
To know more about that(,) click here to find out how….”
Hi Kismessydesk, thanks for your help. Will change that immediately. Sorry for the poor grammar.
I too have 2 more post:
http://second-chance-freedom.com/my-experience-on-depression/
http://second-chance-freedom.com/signs-and-symptoms-depression/
I have already vet them but I am be glad if someone willing to point them out.
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I also think your website's theme is very nice and is very well laid out. Kris mentioned something about the grammar I second with that. It's funny how I actually just added a post on my website about having some help with that myself.