Readers should identify with what they are reading. When you speak to them directly instead of In general terms, the copy has more impact. Use the power of “you” phrases whenever possible.

Instead of:

Our clients appreciate our attention to the details

Use this instead:

You will appreciate our attention to details.



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kanuchijioke Premium
A very great lesson for somebody like me, am learning. Thanks so much Mr. G.
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GeekHibrid Premium
You got it bro...more to come!
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Razack Premium
This is a bery useful piece if information. Thanks bro
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No problem bro! You got it
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Kroher23 Premium
All great tips that I have heard many times and so true. People like things quick now a days! Best of luck to all!
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GeekHibrid Premium
Yes indeed!
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bjdluna Premium Plus
Thank you this is really good information. I need all the help I can get when it comes to writing. I can write more about dogs but that doesn't quite go with my WA niche!
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kymmie99 Premium
Thanks for this info. I am in total agreement. I'm not in for lengthy articles when I search the internet.
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GeekHibrid Premium
Yes Indeed! I'm not either....even if the content is appealing. Most of these people can stop with the "light banter," "rants," and other irrelevant content.
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