Does it hurt to hear the truth?

Last Update: December 12, 2013

I say no it does not, in fact it can put you back a few steps. (to be truthful).

So I feel I am ready to hear the truth about my hard work. (8hrs 22 drafts later).

Please let me know about my latest post "Holiday BBQ Ideas". www.yourprivateoasis.com

Thanks to all who comments.

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Rick H Premium
Hi Danny, I like your use of white space, but I think a little more color or better still the leafy background band at the top a little wider. Maybe one of your festive occasion pictures. I also would think your pictures could be a little larger. I could be wrong, but I don't think the tools are the object. I think people want the good times in their back yard patio. I am a very visual person, and when I see a festive picture like those I am seeing the possibilities. Once I see your vision in my patio then I look at the tools to make it happen. I think you choice of 'Your Private Oasis', is pure genius. Excellent! Just my 2¢.
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success2010 Premium
Thank you very much for all your advice. All you have said I am still working on, but I know it's going in the right direction. Thanks
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mikpj Premium
I like it. Could having abbreviated posts on the homepage be better? like this: myglutenfreestory.com
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mikejennings Premium
really don't see why not if one is curious they will go one step further ....nice approach
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SamTea Premium
Very nice and easy going.
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GdonChris Premium
Great post. Quite engaging and you have the affiliate links in the right places. However, that same post is returning a 404 page whenever I click on the title so maybe you want to perform a check on that.
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success2010 Premium
Please, tell more about this 404 ? Not sure what that means, could you please help with this? Or direct me to where or whom I can find more on this... Thanks
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GdonChris Premium
A 404 an error page. I suggest you delete the post and repost it to fix the problem. Let me know if it works.
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kws123 Premium
Pleasant read...enjoyed it very much.
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