Honest feedback please. My "about me" page
Hi Readers,
I just finished Course 1 today!!! YEeAHHHHHH. I cannot tell you how excited I am and how accomplished I feel. I know i'm still a newborn baby to WA but none the less I feel i'm in the right direction.
I do need your help and honest opinion. I took 2 days to write my "About ME" page and i'm very hesitant to share it (shy mostly), just because this is all so new to me. I'm putting myself out there and my trust to thousands of strangers. I'm very intimidated. But here I go.......
http://newmomhelp101.siterubix.com/about-me
Please be brutal, you will not hurt my feelings but only make me better!!
Thank you all so much.
Sincerely,
~AB
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Hi there... I just took a look at your About me Page...
I think you have done a good job in all honesty. The image is well presented and the paragraphs are a good size.. The material is spaced out nicely and it was quite easy for me to read...
I would just advise you to go over the material again as there are a small handful of grammatical errors.. and personally I would lose the red title...
You have the About Me title in Green.. and the next title in Red... I would limit the colors for now...
Overall a great job... You should be proud to share it with us .. not hesitant :)
All the best
Chris
Hi Chris,
Thank you so much for the feedback. Do you mind pointing out the grammatical errors. I"m not the best in English. Please and thank you.
I didn't notice About Me title was Green. I was thinking red to get my point across. I would have a look at it again.
Thanks again,
~AB
Hi , i m Olso new here end i like to Tell me where did you klick to red His page ! Im in proces building my website too !!!
Hi Chris , i just writte a coment end i Kant place , is telling me to ediț, coment than i bice a klick again end again action end delete coment , of edit coment .. What is this ??
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I see u making good progress on your website. Keep going!!! You awesome!!!
Thank you so much!! i'm really working very hard, good to see you noticed. Hope all is well with you.
yes Aasiyah. Busy with lots of research for my online business. So things are a hectic behind the scenes and i am learning new things everyday. I dont follow you blindly, lol. But keep going. You will do well inshAllah