My site Content up dated
After received some value comments from here with community now my site is up dated. Even though I am sure that it will have a lot more mistake or some thing else need to change which I could not see.
please Take a look at my site http://amazingzon.org
Drop me comment as what you will find please and focus on my writing if possible because English is my main issue
Note: What I am trying to do is to promote my home town and tell me if I can go on with it.
Thanks
Seth
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Good job with the site. You can break up the paragraphs into 3-4 lines per paragraph and it will be easier to read for the visitors.
Also you can put the website title together with the image, and it will looks better.
Hello Misterwailor for your advice. Putting my website tittle together with image that is what I want too but just could not find the way yet. Maybe I will be able to do on the next coming course.
You can use Windows paint program. It is very easy, just copy and paste your header image into paint, then add the text to it.
Hi Seth, first off, what is Amazingzon or an Amazingzon? Didn't make sense to me. The colors are beautiful and it's nicely laid out. The English needs a good going over. I think you have a great start, though. It's the first time I've thought about Cambodia in years. Glad you're trying to put your homeland on the map!
H Carlalves. Thanks a lot for viewing my site, amazingzon, just word I gave to this beautiful town because it has a beautiful views and the most important is, my home town have thousands of amazing temples, each temple have different style of art carved, you may see some of those on my site. I have no idea what should I name it.
That's okay. Maybe you just need a tag line under to explain it. I'm not sure what, though, but it's not a real word, so. . . . maybe something like, "The way I feel every time I look around my hometown." Or just, "I love this town!" Something to gives meaning to that non-word. Good Luck!
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It looks like you've made some changes based on suggestions. It's a GREAT start. The English can be changed as you go along. ~Debbi
Hi Debbi. Thanks for your concerning. Yes I did make some change on my site. I have received a lot of help from you all here but I feel that mys site is too big for me. Isn't it?
I don't think it's too big for you. You might want to change the title though. If you can move it down or change the color to maybe black, it would be easier to read. The blue blends and makes it hard to read.
Ok. thanks a lot I can do it.