I am not working on smartphones data anymore, it was more to show the progress i have made since i started :-) I know the spelling on smartphonesdata is bad bud as i say I am not working on it. Now i am just working on http://streetpost.siterubix.com And if you look at that it's much better than smartphonesdata :-)

Hi Sebastian - Well done for getting so much on your site already. You do need to edit. You have a spelling error in your first page - It should be choose not choise. You do need to edit the whole page because you have errors which are spoiling the good things you have to say.

You need to change the font. it is odd - looks like a bad old typewriter and is very hard to read. Sorry!

Keep adding content

Your latest post - also needs editing. I would run your work through a spell checker/grammer checker program. It won't pick up every error but it will pick up some. Then either you need to get better at editing or you need to ask someone so read through your stuff. Being your own copywriter isn't always easy.

This is advice that I give to a lot of members. Some mistakes you can let go but if you make quite a few, it may turn away readers.

Hey Sebastian. I'd also recommend you add your site to https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/getting-started/please-give-me-feedback-on-my-website if you haven't already done so, as Members there are actively looking to give and receive feedback. :) Rich.