About Plamper89
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Hi. My name is Patrick. I'm a 24 year old Married father of 4 kids with one more on the way. I love every second

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I'd like to get some feedback on my website. I tried asking friends (facebook) and family members for some feedback on what they think of my website so far. I can't seem to get

Hi Patrick. I would post the link to your site here - people won't necessarily go to your profile to find it.

Well done for getting your site off the ground. Here are a few things you may want to think about.

1. Home Page - you invite comments - but there is no facility for the reader to add them.

2. Home Page - some of that information is more suitable on the about me page.

3. About me page - Needs editing slightly - It's all about you. When readers come to your site they are always thinking WIIFM (What's In It For Me) - even on that page. It's not clear at the moment. https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/bis/blog/mistakes-to-avoid-on-your-about-page

4. Font size - In my view this is a little small

5. Small things (which may seem petty) - WA Review. " ....a couple of things that I have found to be great about WA" - there are 11 things! "Here’s a few things that has troubled me at first at Wealthy Affiliate" - there is only one! Use the right words!

6. Images - if you have to put the source of your pictures - put it at the bottom of your article - not under the picture. You should be using effective captions for your pictures because they will help to draw people in. https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/bis/blog/adding-relevant-captions-to-your-images-will-encourage-more-readers

Hope this helps. Beverley

Sorry. I didn't realize I didn't post the link to my site haha.

And thanks for the feedback. This is the exact type of feedback I was looking for.

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Some feedback on the beginning stages of my website please?

Some feedback on the beginning stages of my website please?

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I'd like to get some feedback on my website. I tried asking friends (facebook) and family members for some feedback on what they think of my website so far. I can't seem to get

Hi Patrick. I would post the link to your site here - people won't necessarily go to your profile to find it.

Well done for getting your site off the ground. Here are a few things you may want to think about.

1. Home Page - you invite comments - but there is no facility for the reader to add them.

2. Home Page - some of that information is more suitable on the about me page.

3. About me page - Needs editing slightly - It's all about you. When readers come to your site they are always thinking WIIFM (What's In It For Me) - even on that page. It's not clear at the moment. https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/bis/blog/mistakes-to-avoid-on-your-about-page

4. Font size - In my view this is a little small

5. Small things (which may seem petty) - WA Review. " ....a couple of things that I have found to be great about WA" - there are 11 things! "Here’s a few things that has troubled me at first at Wealthy Affiliate" - there is only one! Use the right words!

6. Images - if you have to put the source of your pictures - put it at the bottom of your article - not under the picture. You should be using effective captions for your pictures because they will help to draw people in. https://my.wealthyaffiliate.com/bis/blog/adding-relevant-captions-to-your-images-will-encourage-more-readers

Hope this helps. Beverley

Sorry. I didn't realize I didn't post the link to my site haha.

And thanks for the feedback. This is the exact type of feedback I was looking for.

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