So far So good
Ok got the site up and have posted to it now to get some traffic (am updating the original site on WP.org as I go) that is the one on Louiswalence.com so most of it looks like this site and I will keep updatting it as I learn more here.
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All the best to you.
Sounds like you know your way around the internet.
The lessons here are excellent at helping you get your website in the best possible shape.
I read through your website. I know you are in the middle of transferring information from your old site to your new one, so my advice might be premature.
I would break up your text with paragraphs, white space and pictures, so it does not appear to be so much to read.
Breaking up the text that way makes it easier for a person to stay engaged and not lose their place as they read and learn about you and what you are offering.
Your main photo is very captivating and inviting.
All the best to you as you continue to work on your on-line business with WA.
Susan
Thanks I do want to add some pictures and the paragraphs is a good suggestion I will go back and do some editing. Appriaciate the comment.
Hi, Susan I've gotten a new 'paid' site and am now progressing through the "Bootcamp" lessons and would like to know if you think I'm on the right track now. (I have made some changes like you suggested before. Its now www.walence.com still using the Southwest Treasures name as the "tag line" That is the actual name of my business thats associated with my tax number etc.
Thanks
Louis
Hi Louis,
Thank you for the update!
I visited your site. Your "About Me". (Or us) page is fabulous!
Your photo is perfect! I think I detect a bit of mischief in those eyes! That is , as I said, perfect!
Also the photo of the store is very clear and classy looking.
Great quality photos!!!
You did an excellent job of breaking up your information into smaller paragraphs.
Your content is very interesting, so now your visitors can read it in chunks and stay on the site longer because it does not appear to be too much to read at one time.
Well done, my friend!
I am going to visit your site again when I get working on my computer. (I just have my IPad right now.)
You are on your way, for sure.
Keep me posted of your progress.
Cheers,
Susan
Thanks again I really do appriciate the insight and suggestions It helps keep me motivated. I'll keep working on the rest of the content for now ( I am progressing through the Boot camp courses now.)
I noticed that I got rated by google and got a badge for it,
I wonder how they know that.
Louis
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Way to go.
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Louis